Tree
a 1-6-16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an interesting picture and is a perfect match for your poem. It looks like it's struggling but making a valiant effort to survive. Which came first, the picture or the poem? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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This is an interesting picture and is a perfect match for your poem. It looks like it's struggling but making a valiant effort to survive. Which came first, the picture or the poem? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Mary. My answer is - a little of both. I began with one idea and a poem, saw this picture and revised it all together.
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You're welcome. Nice job.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What a lovely image of one little tree giving its best to stand out amongst the many. Syllable count and rhyme requirements were met. A wonderful entry.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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What a lovely image of one little tree giving its best to stand out amongst the many. Syllable count and rhyme requirements were met. A wonderful entry.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you, CG
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sally Law
FanStory fantastic, mystery poet! The super short verse poems are tricky, especially when a rhyme is involved. Super great!!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sal XOs..
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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FanStory fantastic, mystery poet! The super short verse poems are tricky, especially when a rhyme is involved. Super great!!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote,
Sal XOs..
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Sal.
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You are most welcome! :))
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a very good entry for the contest. It's hard to create something worthwhile with a 1-6-1 poem when three of the words must rhyme. Your photo and last line really work for you. They help develop your theme that we need to be looking at what we are doing to nature.
Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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This is a very good entry for the contest. It's hard to create something worthwhile with a 1-6-1 poem when three of the words must rhyme. Your photo and last line really work for you. They help develop your theme that we need to be looking at what we are doing to nature.
Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You describe the scene
well and have good rhyme.
-That is a special tree,
"being all it can be!"
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You describe the scene
well and have good rhyme.
-That is a special tree,
"being all it can be!"
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Trees in my park are many shades of green and now turning brown with the Autumn on the horizon, trees are the sentinels that seem to control the seasons, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Trees in my park are many shades of green and now turning brown with the Autumn on the horizon, trees are the sentinels that seem to control the seasons, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Dolly
