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Dwell Well in the Lifestyle You Deserve!11 total reviews
Comment from rockinm76233
congrats on your win of the apartment for rent. I enjoyed the read very much. Hopefully I will be able to find other things that u have written.
Keep writing and we will keep reading.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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congrats on your win of the apartment for rent. I enjoyed the read very much. Hopefully I will be able to find other things that u have written.
Keep writing and we will keep reading.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and encouragement! That was a fun surprise to win the votes for that fun challenge. It's interesting to ponder living quarters in the life after this one. I appreciate your words of support!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A fine entry for the contest! Very punny depictions of heaven and hell--cleverly phrased and smoothly incorporated into the advertisements. This may be a winner.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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A fine entry for the contest! Very punny depictions of heaven and hell--cleverly phrased and smoothly incorporated into the advertisements. This may be a winner.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Oh, thanks so much for your kind review! It was fun to mull over ideas for this creative prompt! It is even more fun to be part of this supportive and encouraging community of writers!
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a good entry for this contest. It is appropriately Heavenly in the first part and downright "Hellish" in the second part. What a
miserable existence one would have "living" there. Five foot ceilings would be enough to have me repenting desperately.cheers Cass
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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This is a good entry for this contest. It is appropriately Heavenly in the first part and downright "Hellish" in the second part. What a
miserable existence one would have "living" there. Five foot ceilings would be enough to have me repenting desperately.cheers Cass
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Hehe, indeed! Wouldn't that be terrible?! Thanks for your fun review and for reading my ads!
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Vrey good piece. Great contest enry. Your description of heaven is perfect. I like the part where you explain the owner lives on site. One suggestion: Capitalize Owner. Good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Vrey good piece. Great contest enry. Your description of heaven is perfect. I like the part where you explain the owner lives on site. One suggestion: Capitalize Owner. Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Midi O! Excellent suggestion to capitalize Owner!! I will do that very thing. You are a wonderful editor. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my ads!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi New Friend.
This is very well written and it is quite creative. You use clever descriptive terms in defining the housing in each place. This is well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hi New Friend.
This is very well written and it is quite creative. You use clever descriptive terms in defining the housing in each place. This is well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Robert, for reading and reviewing my attempt at creating apartment ads! That was a fun challenge. Best wishes with your next creative piece!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from SHABAMO
Great work! I think you came up with two more original and subtle write ups than the other contestants I have seen - no mention of 666 in your second one, instead replaced by a scratchy vinyl of regrets? Excellent. You have my vote and I hope you win!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Great work! I think you came up with two more original and subtle write ups than the other contestants I have seen - no mention of 666 in your second one, instead replaced by a scratchy vinyl of regrets? Excellent. You have my vote and I hope you win!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Ah, thank you for your kind and encouraging review! This was a fun challenge. It's fun to think of all the different want to describe something without naming it specifically. I appreciate you taking the time to read and reply!
Comment from pookietoo
Very nice. Keep up with the poem writing. Keep smiling and sharing your poems with us. Best wishes always have. Keep smiling and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Very nice. Keep up with the poem writing. Keep smiling and sharing your poems with us. Best wishes always have. Keep smiling and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading this! I have never written an apartment for rent ad before! This was a fun challenge! Best wishes to you!
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You too
Comment from Sally Law
This is the either/or reality awaiting. You gave it bearable humor and stirred the reader to contemplate their end. Brilliant presentation!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Eternally yours in Angel Hollow,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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This is the either/or reality awaiting. You gave it bearable humor and stirred the reader to contemplate their end. Brilliant presentation!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Eternally yours in Angel Hollow,
Sal :))
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hehe, "eternally!" Love it. Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback. I wasn't sure I would enter this contest but decided to try. It was a fun challenge! I appreciate you reading it and responding!
Comment from Cogitator
All residents must remain indoors. Safety is not guaranteed. No visitors allowed. No amenities. No services within 10,000 miles. Is this the new COVID mandate? Great effort!...John
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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All residents must remain indoors. Safety is not guaranteed. No visitors allowed. No amenities. No services within 10,000 miles. Is this the new COVID mandate? Great effort!...John
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hehe--ah, maybe those are my subconscious ideas of "hell" after 2020! Thank you for taking the time to read and write a review for me! This was a fun challenge.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This A House for Rent Fiction contest entry speaks with advertisements - apartment for rent for those who may think of looking to move, reminding them to live well in the lifestyle they deserve; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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This A House for Rent Fiction contest entry speaks with advertisements - apartment for rent for those who may think of looking to move, reminding them to live well in the lifestyle they deserve; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Haha, thank you! I'm glad you felt the "ad" vibe I intended. This was a fun challenge! I appreciate your encouraging review!
