Living Above (Corona Virus)
An Acrostic Poem10 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Straight off the hook!!! "Living Above Corona Virus". This is very
creative. And should be in the "All Time Best", as it shows. For,
you have amazing skills. So Keep Writing. And don't forget to
stop by to talk. For, there is always something refreshing and new
on deck. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
Straight off the hook!!! "Living Above Corona Virus". This is very
creative. And should be in the "All Time Best", as it shows. For,
you have amazing skills. So Keep Writing. And don't forget to
stop by to talk. For, there is always something refreshing and new
on deck. Stay Connected
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you for these very encouraging comments, and yes I will be in contact aas I want to read more of your work, as always
very much appreciated****kahpot
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No problem. And if you would like to know more about what I do, you can catch me at? www . reverbnation . com/titanblack222
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
very clever how you also added letters to the end of your sentence. That's not always so easy; to create a word ending in a letter you want or need to use. I am sure it's a head thinker.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
very clever how you also added letters to the end of your sentence. That's not always so easy; to create a word ending in a letter you want or need to use. I am sure it's a head thinker.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much, yes I did have to think and change quite a bit, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem, and very clever to have the double acrostic! The only difficulty is the font colour of the main part, which is a little hard to read. If that was white, and the "Corona Virus" in red as well, it might be even more effective. Just a thought. Very best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
An excellent poem, and very clever to have the double acrostic! The only difficulty is the font colour of the main part, which is a little hard to read. If that was white, and the "Corona Virus" in red as well, it might be even more effective. Just a thought. Very best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much, I heeded your advice/help and totally agree
Comment from lyenochka
Wow!! I think this is only the second acrostic that is acrostic at the beginning and the end. That's brilliant. And I love the uplifting message. We all can do our part to rise above this virus. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
Wow!! I think this is only the second acrostic that is acrostic at the beginning and the end. That's brilliant. And I love the uplifting message. We all can do our part to rise above this virus. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from $pringhart
Very clever and creatively written! A double acrostic with the extra effort put in making it different, I love it. Well thought out, keep up the good effort in your writing.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
Very clever and creatively written! A double acrostic with the extra effort put in making it different, I love it. Well thought out, keep up the good effort in your writing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments and six stars, yes I thought I would try something different, very much appreciated
Comment from royowen
You've very cleverly styled and manufactured a great double edged acrostic, many may not know how difficult this can be, but you've certainly pulled this off in aces. Well done. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
You've very cleverly styled and manufactured a great double edged acrostic, many may not know how difficult this can be, but you've certainly pulled this off in aces. Well done. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for this contest. I like how you have used both the beginning and ending letter of each line to form your Acrostic. It sure has been a different year and a half, but we made it thus far.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
Great entry for this contest. I like how you have used both the beginning and ending letter of each line to form your Acrostic. It sure has been a different year and a half, but we made it thus far.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
Nice try for me... feels like old times here again. Back on LOCKDOWN!!! My greatniece's school is back on e-learning and apparently she had close contact with someone who is now positive for Corona. Now the house is on lockdown. Ahhh well... at least I'm in a much nicer place than before. Now I have a few acres and company to boot. A much better lockdown than before. :)
This poem, by the way, was really awesome for an Acrostic... both front and back sides??? Impressive!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
Hello Author,
Nice try for me... feels like old times here again. Back on LOCKDOWN!!! My greatniece's school is back on e-learning and apparently she had close contact with someone who is now positive for Corona. Now the house is on lockdown. Ahhh well... at least I'm in a much nicer place than before. Now I have a few acres and company to boot. A much better lockdown than before. :)
This poem, by the way, was really awesome for an Acrostic... both front and back sides??? Impressive!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you, and yes I think everyone has had enough
Comment from papa55mike
Corona has forever touched every life in the world. It seems like we are to accept it as the new norm. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
Corona has forever touched every life in the world. It seems like we are to accept it as the new norm. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting entry for the Acrostic poem contest.
It is imaginative and on topic with the present climate of today - covid.
I like that it is different. These two lines threw me a little though -
Living with, the world's next idylliC (maybe the comma that needs to go)
Brought face to face to welcome Hi (do you mean hi as in hello?)
Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
This is an interesting entry for the Acrostic poem contest.
It is imaginative and on topic with the present climate of today - covid.
I like that it is different. These two lines threw me a little though -
Living with, the world's next idylliC (maybe the comma that needs to go)
Brought face to face to welcome Hi (do you mean hi as in hello?)
Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much, I have taken your help and corrected, many thanks for understanding