Fall Is Affectionate
a Nonet contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Rod,
Wow. What a wonderful, creative, imagistic poem of tribute to the debut of Autumn. Lovely, lovely, lovely! I have the slightest of notions why it took top spot. *smile*
I am really curious about why you decided to do:
--> Lost am I in a wine-colored world (instead of:)
--> I am lost in a wine-colored world (?)
Since I realize you have so much more knowledge about these things than I do, I'm grabbing the opportunity for the explanation, please. *smile*
As a rule, I do not like nonets. But how could I not love this poem? Look at these phrases:
** Lost am I in a wine-colored world backlit by a caramel sun.
--> anyone who says that's not magical is just a plain-faced liar. It's as good as any classical poem I've ever read (and a lot better than some of them!)
** Amber-crimson leaves of trees, like soft webs spider-spun,
--> to be honest, I didn't UNDERSTAND this simile? But I love the verbiage. *smile*
This poem was like a beautiful, delicious word soup that I fell into and did not want to be rescued from. I'm sure that made no sense. But I enjoyed it a LOT. I need to visit you way more often.
Thanks a bunch and congrats!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Rod,
Wow. What a wonderful, creative, imagistic poem of tribute to the debut of Autumn. Lovely, lovely, lovely! I have the slightest of notions why it took top spot. *smile*
I am really curious about why you decided to do:
--> Lost am I in a wine-colored world (instead of:)
--> I am lost in a wine-colored world (?)
Since I realize you have so much more knowledge about these things than I do, I'm grabbing the opportunity for the explanation, please. *smile*
As a rule, I do not like nonets. But how could I not love this poem? Look at these phrases:
** Lost am I in a wine-colored world backlit by a caramel sun.
--> anyone who says that's not magical is just a plain-faced liar. It's as good as any classical poem I've ever read (and a lot better than some of them!)
** Amber-crimson leaves of trees, like soft webs spider-spun,
--> to be honest, I didn't UNDERSTAND this simile? But I love the verbiage. *smile*
This poem was like a beautiful, delicious word soup that I fell into and did not want to be rescued from. I'm sure that made no sense. But I enjoyed it a LOT. I need to visit you way more often.
Thanks a bunch and congrats!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, robyn, for the wonderful praise of my Nonet FALL IS AFFECTIONATE. I am truly honored you enjoyed my imagery so much. Fall does inspire me.
I chose to begin the poem with "Lost am I . . ." because I wanted to emphasize the fact the Speaker is "lost" among those trees in a wonderful sense. I also wanted to emphasize the word because it will later rhyme with the other key word of the poem--Most.
As for the simile you don't understand, I'll let it work on you awhile. The meaning will come.
It's a real pleasure to meet another poet who wants to know how & why I write what I do.
Rod
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful nonet poem which describes the rich colors of Fall leaves from crimson-amber, wine, and caramel! I like how you focus on the positive "affection" in the warm colors instead of the cold and darkness.
Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Beautiful nonet poem which describes the rich colors of Fall leaves from crimson-amber, wine, and caramel! I like how you focus on the positive "affection" in the warm colors instead of the cold and darkness.
Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, lyenochka, for sharing my poem and your high praise. Rod
Comment from karenina
Congrats on your win! Wanted to squeeze in review 17 to a secure your Recognized Status! Fall is my favorite season. wine-colored world"---" caramel sun"---
I live in New England and it's just like that!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Congrats on your win! Wanted to squeeze in review 17 to a secure your Recognized Status! Fall is my favorite season. wine-colored world"---" caramel sun"---
I live in New England and it's just like that!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I appreciate your confirming that Fall in New England is like what I described in my poem. Thank you so much, Karenina, for sharing my poem. Rod
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If you don't live here I hope you come visit in Autumn!
Karenina
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well-written Nonet about fall. You have used very descriptive words to describe the colour of fall. Truly is is the best season of the year, as nature displays her greatest artistry.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Well-written Nonet about fall. You have used very descriptive words to describe the colour of fall. Truly is is the best season of the year, as nature displays her greatest artistry.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Fall is definitely the most colorful season. Many thanks, Anne, for sharing my Nonet and your kind praise. Rod
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You are welcome, Rod
Comment from artisart4u
Me too, the autumn colors are so beautiful and the outside is tranquil.
Your poem is written like you were supposed to write it.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Me too, the autumn colors are so beautiful and the outside is tranquil.
Your poem is written like you were supposed to write it.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this flattering review of my Nonet and all those bright stars. Rod
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is romping away to a well deserved win in this contest. From the glorious photo to your richly descriptive words, you've captured the essence of autumn in colour and emotion.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Your poem is romping away to a well deserved win in this contest. From the glorious photo to your richly descriptive words, you've captured the essence of autumn in colour and emotion.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi, Lisa. Thank you so much for your congrats and your lovely praise of my Nonet. Rod
Comment from Mary Shifman
You've written a beautiful poem about my favorite season. I enjoyed the rhyme and the imagery. I'm going to have to try writing this poetry form sometime. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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You've written a beautiful poem about my favorite season. I enjoyed the rhyme and the imagery. I'm going to have to try writing this poetry form sometime. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much, Mary, for the lovely review. Nonets are more challenging than they look, but fun to write.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Fall is Affectionate, has the proper nine to one descending syllable count per line and creates a scene where the sights of a forest walk are more a greeting from nature. Nice.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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This nonet, Fall is Affectionate, has the proper nine to one descending syllable count per line and creates a scene where the sights of a forest walk are more a greeting from nature. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing my Nonet, Bill, and your comments.
Comment from Versch
This is a beautiful Nonet Poetry describing well the Fall/Autumn season. The picture is most captivating that compliments the wordings. Fantastic! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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This is a beautiful Nonet Poetry describing well the Fall/Autumn season. The picture is most captivating that compliments the wordings. Fantastic! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much, Versch, for the lovely review of my Nonet.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your words are very descriptive and I can picture everything that you're talking about. I can feel how it feels in the fall. (if that makes any sense.) The picture that you chose enhances your poem perfectly. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Your words are very descriptive and I can picture everything that you're talking about. I can feel how it feels in the fall. (if that makes any sense.) The picture that you chose enhances your poem perfectly. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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I am so pleased you can picture everything I am describing in my Nonet, Patty. Thank you very much for reviewing.
