Mother Nature At Her Best
autumn ( contest entry )48 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
What a beautiful picture of Mother Nature this is!
It enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
What a beautiful picture of Mother Nature this is!
It enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi RP, your soooo cute you...Thank You for everything I can think of...your always amazing review...and your soooooo shinning stars...Thank You for the BEST OF LUCK...love
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L. Raven - A Talented Poet!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Hi RP, you make my heart all a flutter...
Thank You sooooooo much...always best wishes back at you...love xxoo
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Hi L. Raven, Most Welcome!
It means you've accepted my CONGRATULATIONS on your victory in this contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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always you...and the bestest of wishes to you...love xxoo
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Hi L. Raven, Most Welcome!
It's so kind of you.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from VJWild
Wow! Everything about this make me smile! I never would have ever thought to compare nature to a fashion show, and funny how fashion seems to shine this time of year. This is so great. Definitely one of my all time favorites! The artwork is so so perfect. It gives the illusion of a model spinning at the end of a runway in a couture dress!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Wow! Everything about this make me smile! I never would have ever thought to compare nature to a fashion show, and funny how fashion seems to shine this time of year. This is so great. Definitely one of my all time favorites! The artwork is so so perfect. It gives the illusion of a model spinning at the end of a runway in a couture dress!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi VJWild, Thank You sooooo very much for an amazing review...
and Thank You for all your shinning stars...I'm so glad it made you smile...love
Comment from Ricky1024
"Mother Nature At Her Best"
This is a 5/7/5 writing prompt entry rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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"Mother Nature At Her Best"
This is a 5/7/5 writing prompt entry rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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HI Ricky, Thank You for a wonderful review you...
I am so glad you like it...God Bless You...love
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The colourful seasonal dress worn by trees displaying many shades of gold, a fine 5-7-5, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought the scene of Autumnal colour here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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The colourful seasonal dress worn by trees displaying many shades of gold, a fine 5-7-5, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought the scene of Autumnal colour here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Dolly, Thank You so much for a wonderful review you...
my favorite thing about Autumn is...watching the rusty red colored leaves fall like rain...Thank You...Love
Comment from karenina
Pretty cool mate and a poem after !y own heart. If I had my way it'd be Autumn all year long! 5-7-5 on the nose. Nicely presented! Can't wait for our New England leaves to begin blushing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Pretty cool mate and a poem after !y own heart. If I had my way it'd be Autumn all year long! 5-7-5 on the nose. Nicely presented! Can't wait for our New England leaves to begin blushing!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Karenina, hope you are doing well...Thank You for a wonderful review you...my favorite part of autumn...is watching the rusty colored leaves fall from the trees like rain...Thank You You...love
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Loved your poem!
Karenina
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love to you!!! take care...Thank You...
Comment from Jasminium
It is good..amazing naturist visual..However from 5-7-5 point of view it is hard to follow which word is in which line..But other than that I feel your message was conveyed..it was simple and pure..Good luck and keep writing!!
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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It is good..amazing naturist visual..However from 5-7-5 point of view it is hard to follow which word is in which line..But other than that I feel your message was conveyed..it was simple and pure..Good luck and keep writing!!
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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each word is in the line it should be...Thanks...
Comment from Hitcher
I love your stunning moving picture, it gels perfectly with your creative little 5-7-5 offering. One almost expects a crowd to clap and applaud as there eyes take in the site. A Very cool poem... Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I love your stunning moving picture, it gels perfectly with your creative little 5-7-5 offering. One almost expects a crowd to clap and applaud as there eyes take in the site. A Very cool poem... Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Hitcher, Thank You so much for a truly wonderful review...
I love this picture as well...and Thank You for your Good Luck...
my favorite part of Autumn is watching the Autumn leaves fall from the trees like rain...Thank You...You...love
Comment from kahpot
How beautifully written and presented, yes nature and Her seasons can certainly give us all a fashion show, love the artwork and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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How beautifully written and presented, yes nature and Her seasons can certainly give us all a fashion show, love the artwork and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Kahpot, Thank You for a wonderful review...I love watching the
rusty red leaves from the trees fall like rain...God Bless...love
