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Journey of Faith

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "His Blood Alone"
Along the Way in my Life with Jesus

55 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a extremely strong poem you have penned here Mary Kay, and especially a rich, thoughtful commentary that you have written in your author notes for our consideration.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much, Katherine, for your excellent review, the five stars and your thoughtful observations. I appreciate it all very much.
    Love and blessings, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
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This sonnet, His Blood Alone, has the proper formatting and serves as a testimony to God for all the power, grace, and protection He gives.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Bill, for this excellent, encouraging and meaningful review, and the five stars. I appreciate your reading and reviewing. May God bless you! - Mary Kay
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Very nice expression of your heart-felt and profound faith that is the center of your life. I hope the work does well in the contest, my friend. I enjoyed the notes after the poem, also.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much, Ted, for your fine and excellent review of my poem, the five stars and your thoughtful remarks. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my notes. May God bless you, my friend.
    - Mary Kay
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry wit us. God put this poem in my path because I needed to read it today. I thank you again. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Barbara, for your beautiful review, the five stars and your encouraging comments. I am blessed by what you wrote! May God bless you, too.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Your faith is made manifest in this stunning paean to the Lord. This would have made for a fine entry in the faith poetry contest too. Elegant and graceful.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much, Liz, for your kind and excellent review, the five stars and your thoughtful comments.
    Love and blessings,
    Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
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Lovely poem to the Lord for all He has done and keeps doing for us as we try to live this life with our imperfect selves. He's with us in our "battlefields" and "stormy seas."
Isaiah 53 is a great reference to share. Handel used so many of these verses in his oratorio, the Messiah!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, dear Helen, for your spectacular review, six-star rating and very meaningful comments.
    Handel's "Messiah" is my favorite piece of classical music, of all time. It's just so beautiful and full of awesome scripture quotations, I could listen to it for many hours. I was very blessed by your review, as I am by your fellowship.
    Love and prayers,
    Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from pharp
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Mary Kay,


You did an exceptional job in penning this beautiful sonnet for the No Rules Poetry writing prompt.

The rhyming is excellent throughout, with a very smooth flow.

Your love sonnet to the Lord reflects your praise, faith, and trust in our Lord and Savior.

The chapter Isaiah 53:1-12 touches ones' heart and shows how Christ, a man without sin, suffered and died for all. I always tear up when I read this chapter. Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem and the additional blessing of your author's notes. The very best to you in the contest.

Have a blessed week, my friend.

Lots of love and hugs...Portia

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, dear Portia, for your heartfelt, loving and beautiful six-star review. I deeply appreciate your warm, personal comments and the fellowship reflected in what you wrote.
    Isaiah was truly a visionary prophet, almost as though he was seeing Christ crucified. Hallelujah, what a Savior!
    I hope you're having a blessed week, also.
    Love and prayers,
    Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A lovely sonnet for our Lord, Jesus Christ. A great paean to Him. Your poem is spiritually healing and well written, with great spiritual imagery and visuals. Loved your artwork.

These stood out:

When fears or doubts arise within,
or troubles swirl on stormy seas;
else battlefields tempt me to sin,
I turn to Christ, the Prince of Peace.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thank you very much, Eternal Muse, for your outstanding six-star review and all your thoughtful comments.
    As
    As long as we're in this world, life isn't easy, but He's promised to be with us, always. We can rest in His strength and trust in His Word. May He bless you, abundantly!
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Poetic Friend
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This is a graceful poem, written about Christ's love and sacrifice. Like you, I can't wait to see Christ's face. The rhyme and meter are flawless, unforced.

Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed week.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Dear Nancy, thank you so much for this beautiful six-star review and for all your lovely comments. The thought of actually seeing the Lord fills me with great joy and hope. Until that day comes, we will continue His work, rely upon His strength, trust in His Word and just lean upon His strength! God bless you, my sister.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Anne Johnston
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A well-written sonnet about the Lord Jesus Christ and the love that caused Him to give His life for our redemption. I love that chapter in Isaiah and it certainly is a prophetic description of the Lord. So thankful that I know Him as my Saviour. Great closing lines:
"His Blood alone gives me the grace,
someday to rise, and see His face."

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much, dear Anne, for this beautiful review, for the five stars and for all your encouragement. It is indeed such a joy and a privilege to know Him! May God bless you, my sister and friend. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
reply by Anne Johnston on 29-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.