Late Autumn Song
a lyrical poem about Fall19 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem for autumn. Great overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. congrats on the 1st place win. Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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This is a nicely written poem for autumn. Great overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. congrats on the 1st place win. Very well done.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Joanne, for sharing my poem. I also appreciate the congrats. Rod
Comment from Bill Schott
This No-restrictions poem, Late Autumn Song, captures sights and sounds from this buffering time between burgeoning life and the dead of winter. Nice.
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This No-restrictions poem, Late Autumn Song, captures sights and sounds from this buffering time between burgeoning life and the dead of winter. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am delighted you enjoyed the sights and sounds of LATE AUTUMN SONG. Thanks for sharing, Bill.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this rhyming poem very much. The rhymes are solid, and the story is interesting. I was also very drawn to the illustration with its clear "between major seasons" feel about it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed this rhyming poem very much. The rhymes are solid, and the story is interesting. I was also very drawn to the illustration with its clear "between major seasons" feel about it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am delighted you enjoyed the rhymes and story of my poem, Katherine. Thank you very much for sharing. Rod
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem about Autumn. Your descriptkie words paint such a vivid picture. An excellent competition entry.
Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem about Autumn. Your descriptkie words paint such a vivid picture. An excellent competition entry.
Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Jen, and that my words created vivid pictures for you. Rod
Comment from Sharon Feldt
The lyrical nature of your poem complements beautifully the words you use to describe autumn's attraction. You have used senses and emotions to enhance the verbal picture: doleful trill of Nature's flute; frosty rim of the birdbath; melancholy haunting note, Winter's wrath. Beautifully evocative of the scene that precedes cold, silent winter.
the lyrical nature of your poem complements the beauty of your
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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The lyrical nature of your poem complements beautifully the words you use to describe autumn's attraction. You have used senses and emotions to enhance the verbal picture: doleful trill of Nature's flute; frosty rim of the birdbath; melancholy haunting note, Winter's wrath. Beautifully evocative of the scene that precedes cold, silent winter.
the lyrical nature of your poem complements the beauty of your
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank your very much, Sharon, for your kind praise of LATE AUTUMN SONG. Rod
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lyrical poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively composed--with good rhyme and meter and a vividly descriptive blend of literal and figurative languge. Lovely celebration of fall!
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Your lyrical poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively composed--with good rhyme and meter and a vividly descriptive blend of literal and figurative languge. Lovely celebration of fall!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am so pleased you found my poem to be a "lovely celebration of fall." Thank you very much for your high praise. Rod
Comment from MissMerri
I found this poem to be absolutely beautiful, full of imagery and sensory clues to make the experience come alive. I especially loved this verse:
"It's in the whistle of the wind,
the doleful trill of Nature's flute
played wistfully across the roofs,
'tween limbs of trees, a treble toot."
I hope it does well in this contest. I really enjoyed it. MM
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I found this poem to be absolutely beautiful, full of imagery and sensory clues to make the experience come alive. I especially loved this verse:
"It's in the whistle of the wind,
the doleful trill of Nature's flute
played wistfully across the roofs,
'tween limbs of trees, a treble toot."
I hope it does well in this contest. I really enjoyed it. MM
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Miss Merri, I am honored to receive such an endorsement of my Autumn poem. Many thanks for your very kind praise and that bonanza of stars. Rod
Comment from Wendy G
A very striking image, perfect choice! And your poem is well crafted with its smooth rhyme and metre flowing well. The musical theme running throughout is really well done too, so I send good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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A very striking image, perfect choice! And your poem is well crafted with its smooth rhyme and metre flowing well. The musical theme running throughout is really well done too, so I send good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am delighted you like my poem and the illustration I chose to accompany it, Wendy. I truly appreciate your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a good one. I like the title, and you have done a very good job with the rhyme and meter. "Nature's flute" is a term that I have not run into before.
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This is a good one. I like the title, and you have done a very good job with the rhyme and meter. "Nature's flute" is a term that I have not run into before.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Paul, for your praise of my poem, its title and its rhyme and meter. Rod
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A poem about birds singing and then they subside because winter is on its way. I love the song of a wren in the spring. They traveled between our homes when my wonderful neighbor was still alive.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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A poem about birds singing and then they subside because winter is on its way. I love the song of a wren in the spring. They traveled between our homes when my wonderful neighbor was still alive.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Rosemary, for sharing my poem. Rod
