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A prayer -

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Comment from pharp
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Roy,

You have penned a beautiful and heartfelt prayer.
The Lord is indeed powerfully using you to touch the
hearts of many, as you witness in a very humble and caring way.
Thanks for sharing your joy in the Lord.
May God continue to bless and keep you in His loving care.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Portia, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
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I sit alone in the dark at night after my grandchildren finally go to sleep and I talk out loud to God, searching for ways to face the tomorrow regardless of what it brings. I can not see the light, but deep inside I feel he is there.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Yes, I agree, you?re not alone dear girl, you?ve got the heavenly host on your side, as Elisha asked God to open his servant?s eyes, so ask for you, thanks dear Carol, blessings Roy
Comment from Nancy s
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Beautiful, truly beautiful. What a lovely prayer. It is deep and heartfelt, lacking selflessness and full of innocent yearning. Great read. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Nancy, for these wonderful comments and lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from zanya
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The sentiments here are expressed so eloquently and so beautifully about the power of God to transform and make meaningful our earthly lives -Faith is a powerful force

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Zanya, for these wonderful comments and lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Artasylum
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Lord is in my molecules and every day they fire up to give me such grace and sometimes my molecuels are lazy and make no effort to seek the light.... to that I say, Bad Girl.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Justin Chopin
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This is a beautiful prayer Roy. I'm glad that you were able to articulate your willingness to bring shattered souls to Jesus through your poetry. Really enjoyed this piece especially when with the images of the crown , and the saints that you utilized so well. Great work.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Justin, for these terrific comments and excellent review, blessings Roy
reply by Justin Chopin on 13-Oct-2021
    You're welcome Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem has smooth meter and unforced rhyme to show your faith and every writer's wish that their writing riches their readers.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Joan for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by dragonpoet on 13-Oct-2021
    You are most kindly welcome, Roy.
    Have a great day.
    Joan
Comment from tfawcus
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You are exceptionally good at these poems that describe the saving grace that rescues one from dark places and despair. Your faith shines through strongly and, as always, you couch your words beautifully in terms of rhyme and rhythm. A fine poem. Much enjoyed.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Tony for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy
Comment from patcelaw
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When I came to the Lord, I experienced a new peace that was such a blessing to my soul, I enjoyed this poem and your presentation is lovely.
Patricia

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Patricia, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy
Comment from godlucifer
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a prayer is joyful. i think it makes our day the next morning we wake up. through out the day their are prayer and joy within our spiritual weatlh.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy