Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 3-7-5 poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery of winter.
A good message too;
after winter there is the rebirth of spring.
Perfect art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you Robert!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery
describing your mood.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thanks so much, Pam!

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Author. I love the picture you paired with your precise words. Great job with the syllable count per line. Those lines read smoothly with great imagery and feeling.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Jan!!!