Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

I love me a good thunderstorm. All tucked up in bed safe. Listening to the thunder and rain. This poem reminded me of those times and it's so good! :):)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Me too! It's my favorite kind of weather. Thanks so much for the six stars. :)

Comment from Carmen Ducharme

Excellent

What a lovely poem you have written here for the contest it's perfect. I love the picture you included makes it shine even more ! Good luck in the contest !

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thank you for such a great review. :)

Comment from Toni Newell

Excellent

I can feel the storm whilst reading your piece. You have conveyed a picture with few words successfully. I like the imagery that you have produced. Thank you

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This response to the 3-7-5 prompt has an astonishing visual component which inserts itself beautifully into the poem, becoming an integral part of it.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-7-5, Nature's Light Show, has the right set up and, with the help of the sensational graphic, creates the dismal and scary storm effect.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. :)

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

What a lovely picture and your poem goes right with it. You did a good job. I am voting for you. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work. You did so well.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this great review...I'd appreciate your vote. :)

reply by Eunice Amero on 08-Oct-2021

I gave it. You are more than welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A storm brewing with a lightening storm here and I enjoyed your anticipation of winds and rain in this electric storm, a vibrant write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for reading my poem and for this positive response. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Awesome, mystery poet. A superb entry vivid imagery, and presentation. This looked like my sky last night as thunderstorms moved in. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the vote,
Sally XOs...

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this great review. I always appreciate it. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good play on words in your satori.

Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear from you and appreciate your comments. :)

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Okay, this is a splendid poem and the picture is wonderful. I really like storms and I enjoy watching the lightening, especially at night. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

I love storms as well, we don't get enough of them where I live. We do get blizzards in winter though...thanks so much for reading my poem. :)