Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, and the image is awesome. Your lines flow smoothly, and the bold font works well.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you so much, as always, I appreciate your opinion. Have a wonderful night. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Love the rhyming of the first and last lines in this piece. The picture you have paired is very impressive. I love a good thunderstorm. You did a wonderful job with this one! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this exceptional rating...awesome. :)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent, dramatic 3-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good imagery.
Nice addition of the rhymes and art work.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thankbyou, I appreciate this very nice review. :)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

yes this poem presents the situation of the pending storm with 'Dark clouds..' the atmosphere of the coming storm is well evoked - thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)