A Lovely Autumn Day
Why Autumn Is Beautiful3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-7-5, A Lovely Autumn Day, has the right set up and finds the dimming colors of the green leaves and the brightness of the new golden ones pleasant.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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This 3-7-5, A Lovely Autumn Day, has the right set up and finds the dimming colors of the green leaves and the brightness of the new golden ones pleasant.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good play on words in your satori.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Good play on words in your satori.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 3-7-5 poem for the contest
with the nice addition of the rhyme.
Good topical theme many will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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You've written an excellent 3-7-5 poem for the contest
with the nice addition of the rhyme.
Good topical theme many will relate to.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
