Last Leaves
Winter wind tears away the last leaves on oak trees.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-7-5, Last Leaves, has the right set up and creates a scene of the final surrender of the last leaves to the deathly cold of winter.
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This 3-7-5, Last Leaves, has the right set up and creates a scene of the final surrender of the last leaves to the deathly cold of winter.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from lynglyng
Very good imagery with your descriptive words. I thought cornflake leaves felt out of place with the feel of the poem. But, the rest of the poem flowed nicely! Good luck!
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Very good imagery with your descriptive words. I thought cornflake leaves felt out of place with the feel of the poem. But, the rest of the poem flowed nicely! Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your feedback. Cornflake leaves was used to represent dried leaves on a tree. However, maybe it doesn't work. Thanks for taking the time to respond.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good play on words in your satori. Pretty presentation.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
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Good play on words in your satori. Pretty presentation.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Most appreciative.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Yes things is so bare at this time of year. Your poem tells it all. Love the picture. You did a good job. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
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Yes things is so bare at this time of year. Your poem tells it all. Love the picture. You did a good job. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Most appreciative.
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