Memorials
To remember a lost loved one12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Memorials, has the proper formatting and creates the scene where sorrows are carried away with the rising heat of hope which lifts love.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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This 3-5-3, Memorials, has the proper formatting and creates the scene where sorrows are carried away with the rising heat of hope which lifts love.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from pookietoo
I love he photo and the poem. I love how you rhymed every line. I wish you good luck in the contest. I hope you continue to write and enjoy life. :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I love he photo and the poem. I love how you rhymed every line. I wish you good luck in the contest. I hope you continue to write and enjoy life. :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's so nice to hear from you. :)
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Welcome.
Comment from HarryT
Like it. Says so much in so few words. Excellent choice of pic to go with the verse. Actually, now that I think more, the words were so vivid a pic would not be needed. Great job!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Like it. Says so much in so few words. Excellent choice of pic to go with the verse. Actually, now that I think more, the words were so vivid a pic would not be needed. Great job!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
This poem reminds me of when we set of paper lanterns for loved one who had passed away. Hoping that he would be able to see them from heaven. Wonderful poem. Six stars!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This poem reminds me of when we set of paper lanterns for loved one who had passed away. Hoping that he would be able to see them from heaven. Wonderful poem. Six stars!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for your caring words. :)
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful and touching poem, that hints at something very tragic. I like that rhymes you chose and the way it flows. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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This is a beautiful and touching poem, that hints at something very tragic. I like that rhymes you chose and the way it flows. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem. I know a family who sends one off every year, to remember thier son who died in a car crash. Thanks again.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the end rhymes, and the great message. I have read about these lanterns. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the end rhymes, and the great message. I have read about these lanterns. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for this great review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Wendy G
This was excellent, being able to rhyme the three lines, with just eleven syllables. A different thought as well. There is a bigger story behind the lanterns for the reader to ponder. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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This was excellent, being able to rhyme the three lines, with just eleven syllables. A different thought as well. There is a bigger story behind the lanterns for the reader to ponder. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I always appreciate your input on my poems. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These lanterns are magical to watch and represent those we have lost in life, a melancholy write, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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These lanterns are magical to watch and represent those we have lost in life, a melancholy write, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. Have a great day. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Winds that blow
lift lanterns that glow...
Sad thoughts flow."
You have chosen good words to describe this picture, good rhyming, and well presented. What a tribute to a loved one who has passed away.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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"Winds that blow
lift lanterns that glow...
Sad thoughts flow."
You have chosen good words to describe this picture, good rhyming, and well presented. What a tribute to a loved one who has passed away.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Yes it is...thanks so much for this thoughtful review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Paul McFarland
This poem becomes very effective when looking at the accompanying picture. The rhyming is excellent. Great job for a difficult three-five-three prompt.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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This poem becomes very effective when looking at the accompanying picture. The rhyming is excellent. Great job for a difficult three-five-three prompt.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I know a family who does this every year on the birthday of thier son who died in a car crash Thanks again for reading.
