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Addiction's whore

A poem of hope

53 total reviews 
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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It always amazes me, Roy, knowing the man we know through your beautiful poems that you once were addicted to addictions. With His help you did a lot of hard yards to become who you are today. Thanks for sharing, cheers.
valda

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
    Thanks Valda, there?s a lot of people you wouldn?t think would have these maladies, you don?t hear of them till they?re in trouble, thank you for these beaut comments and a bonza review, heh heh blessings Roy
Comment from Deniz22
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Awesome, brother, simply awesome. Pray some will heed and take heart in the knowledge of Him who loved us and gave Himself for us.

God bless you and do keep writing for Him.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Denis for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
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Great I know why it's 8th place once again this was brilliant thank you for sharing thank you for taking the time out to be creative and blessed with the town that you have thanks once again

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Roy, but what if there's a reckoning???...I would
rather be safe than sorry...

the past is forgiven by Jesus...to be reborn is your new present...live it for Him...

love your poem my sweet friend...and love the picture...very well written sweet guy...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Linda, for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by l.raven on 13-Oct-2021
    always welcome swee guy...love xxoo
Comment from Raul1
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I like the dark side in your poem. It is so creepy and humid of the verses turning bad vibes into good poetry. Excellent work! I did enjoy reading it. Thank you for sharing! It is dark poetry.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Raul, for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by Raul1 on 12-Oct-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from pookietoo
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Roy, yes, addiction of any kind is tough. It does rule your mind. The rhyming is great. I am God helped you overcome your addictions. Thanks for writing this poem.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
reply by pookietoo on 12-Oct-2021
    Welcome.
Comment from Janet Foor
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Masterfully written from the heart and from experience. Your witness is powerful and brings the message right to the heart with the multi layers of life. We will all stand naked before him. What then?

Well done my friend
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Janet, for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from HollyRose0829
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This is a beautiful poem. I can feel the emotions poured into each stanza, and it flows so smoothly. I am proud of you for recovering from your addictions.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Holly, for these wonderful comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mabaker12
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But what if there is a reckoning?
How truly spoke the desperate sinner, as he fell at his Master's knee.
This reckoning Roy is what man is all about.
Thank you for this beautiful piece.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Anne for these terrific comments and excellent review, blessings Roy
Comment from amahra
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Wow, thanks for sharing that testimony of God's grace upon you. Like the words of a song: "He cleaned [you] up and turned [you] around--placed [your] feet on solid ground." Wonderful poem, Roy.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Amahra, for these terrific comments and excellent review, blessings Roy