Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from miajaffri
I love the picture but I think the poem is written as a fragment of a sentence. Something like this sets it apart as a poem:
A red farmhouse
with two priceless sparrows
sit on a distant tree
limbs in the background.
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I love the picture but I think the poem is written as a fragment of a sentence. Something like this sets it apart as a poem:
A red farmhouse
with two priceless sparrows
sit on a distant tree
limbs in the background.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
Comment from Demetria Blouin
I'm sorry if I'm not understanding this piece but I don't what the poem is about. It paints a beautiful picture of the background but I am not understanding the plot of the poem itself.
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I'm sorry if I'm not understanding this piece but I don't what the poem is about. It paints a beautiful picture of the background but I am not understanding the plot of the poem itself.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
How adorable is that artwork to match your words!
I loved the picture of a farmhouse in the country your words paint for the reader. Superb imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
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How adorable is that artwork to match your words!
I loved the picture of a farmhouse in the country your words paint for the reader. Superb imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
Comment from pookietoo
Yes that poem describes country life very well. Those sparrows are beautiful. I was raised in a red brick farmhouse. I hope you have a wonderful night.
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Yes that poem describes country life very well. Those sparrows are beautiful. I was raised in a red brick farmhouse. I hope you have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your club entry. Your words are descriptive and paint great picture for readers.
May I suggest ~
A red farmhouse in the country
two beautifully colorful sparrows
sit on some tree limbs
as they admire the scene
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your club entry. Your words are descriptive and paint great picture for readers.
May I suggest ~
A red farmhouse in the country
two beautifully colorful sparrows
sit on some tree limbs
as they admire the scene
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
Comment from royowen
Oh what serenity displayed in this most beautiful painting, displaying the beauty of this idyllic country scene, and you've used your talent to bring it to us, thank you my friend well done, blessings Roy
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Oh what serenity displayed in this most beautiful painting, displaying the beauty of this idyllic country scene, and you've used your talent to bring it to us, thank you my friend well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021