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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with this chapter, Beth, I enjoyed reading it. You always give readers great info on the life experiences of your family in a non-judgmental way. There are always facts and interesting tidbits for each of them. You and your husband were really busy keeping up with all of them--but in a good way. I liked the part about the time your husband had a flat and didn't call to let you know he was staying overnight. Near the end, I would not capitalize the word casino.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Jan. I glad you like reading my xtory. I am always pleased with your reviews.
    Beth
Comment from Judy Lawless
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I don't know how you kept track of all Connie's boyfriends, lol. I'm glad camp worked out for her and she got a good review from the camp director. Another interesting read, Beth.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thanks Judy. I didn't keep up with all of them but she had far less than Christi. Christi had enough guys in her life briefly to fill a telephone book, but she was shopping and she never married any of them. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.
    Beth
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Another Birdie Back in the Nest
BethShelby
I like the title of your memories of Connie and
Kimberly was nearly seven months pregnant
Beth You are a wonder to recall of what each of your family in the past did.
Gert

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you Gert. I appreciate the review and comments.
    Beth
reply by Gert sherwood on 09-Oct-2021
    Beth you are most welcome
    Gert




Comment from Ben Colder
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I got to agree with Don. Sometimes it does seem we men are outnumbered by the girls. Well, Connie lived over it and left with an excellent report. Good one Beth.

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you Chuck. Connie had a good experience at a Christian camp and to an extent it was a growing up experience for her. There is never a point at which everything was perfect but that is life.
    Beth
reply by Ben Colder on 09-Oct-2021
    Yep. I suppose to the
reply by Ben Colder on 09-Oct-2021
    I suppose the Lord tries us in every way. LOL.
Comment from royowen
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Life continues on with a new boy Charlie, entering the scene, but then exiting it to never be seen again. Connie shows some spark of knowing God better than first thought of. It just goes to show, that good training always works in the long run, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Typo : But her health seem(ed) good

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you Roy, I think I said it wouldn't be the last we saw of Charlie. He will be in the picture for a while. Connie was returning from working in a Christian camp Those chuch sponsored camp make a difference in kids lives. They usually return home on a spiritual high. Sometimes it last but not always.
    Beth