Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

This was so good I feel like it would make a great Halloween children's book for some reason. I love the picture you used and your spirit for writing about Halloween

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Thank you for this great rating, it's appreciated. :)

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

It was a treat to find humor rather than gore. You wrote so well that I could envision the whole scene. I particularly liked your last line. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)

reply by Susan Newell on 10-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

This is such a delightful Halloween poem! Oh my goodness how sweet that they all get together for an annual dance. And how convenient that they are already dressed in nice clothing! Lol

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021

Thanks for this great review and for being a steady reader of my work. :)

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

Pretty good may I say you made my night and my day brilliant I must say hurray hurray keep on going through the storm a brilliant writer has been born keep doing you great

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021

What a wonderful rhyming review! Thank you for making my day. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is hilarious as this bunch of bony bodies decide to dance and make music here, good rhyming and this entertaining post made me laugh, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021

I thank you for this review, it's very kind of you. BTW...I love your new picture, you look like a model! :)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer,
Upbeat and rhythmical!
Love the graphics.
I remember the graphic from a childhood cartoon!
If I may offer one suggestion, I would eliminate the final stanza. Your poem is complete without it.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!

diane

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for this terrific review and for your suggestion. I'll look it over again.:)

reply by Mrs. KT on 09-Oct-2021

Best Wishes!

diane

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Boy, this is such an adorable Halloween poem! Starting from your animated picture, everything was perfect and had a stunning Halloween imagery. Your visuals and presentation are remarkable.

I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for reading my poem and for this great review. :)