Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Well done! I can't imagine many folks who would dare to disagree with this lovely sentiment. *smile* The syllable counts are all just right. The rhymes are a nice added touch, with the bonus of the internal rhyming in the middle line - cool!

The image you've chosen pairs really well, too. Great job!

If this doesn't win, I can guarantee that everyone who reads it will appreciate the message and nod their head while reading - just as I did. It's a great post and should be a contender Good luck!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thank you. It's a message designed to make people think and become more positive. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

Beautiful 1-9-1 poem. You've done so much with the 11 syllables! You've actually gotten three rhyming words in there, and a very important message.
I love your picture. It reminds me of one of the old UNICEF greeting cards. They were always so colorful and different.


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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this nice review. :)