Comment from Richard Frohm

Excellent

I enjoyed your story. You did an excellent job not only describing Grandpa Joe's experiences, but the way he told his story. I know this is fiction, but I hope you were lucky enough to have a real Grandpa Joe.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Cheers

Comment from writer723

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your intriguing story. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for your positive feedback. I am glad you enjoyed it. Cheers

Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

You did a beautiful job writing this war story. I hope you continue to write stories like this. Good luck to you in this contest. Life is short so enjoy it. Take care.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Thank you for your encouraging and lovely comments. I am glad you enjoyed it. Cheers

reply by pookietoo on 13-Oct-2021

Welcome.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an uplifting read, to hear about stories that though scary and hard have made so many bond with those they did not know and those that they have known all their lives, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for your positive response. Cheers