Next Monday
I'll start my diet...11 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A well written poem. The rhyme scheme is consistent. The language is plain, but effective. The poem flows well from problem to defining the problem to a promised solution. All the while it conveys a competent grasp of sarcasm.
Thanks for a good read.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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A well written poem. The rhyme scheme is consistent. The language is plain, but effective. The poem flows well from problem to defining the problem to a promised solution. All the while it conveys a competent grasp of sarcasm.
Thanks for a good read.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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You are welcome.
