I'm Becoming a Bore
With all habits, we need to know when enough is enough.12 total reviews
Comment from Sophie Terrell
Your plucky rhyme scheme is very catchy and wonderfully executed. It almost makes me feel rushed to read it, which I think is a PERFECT match to your prompt! I think you should do great in the contest, good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Your plucky rhyme scheme is very catchy and wonderfully executed. It almost makes me feel rushed to read it, which I think is a PERFECT match to your prompt! I think you should do great in the contest, good luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for this terrific review and your good wishes, Sophie! I got the bit between my teeth and bolted.
I see you are a new member - Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time with FanStory; Warning! - it might lead to an addiction like mine.
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Haha! I have a feeling I'm already down the same path of addiction as you already!
Comment from royowen
It's a great entry in this "I can't stop," contest. You're absolutely right, I've been here for near ten years now, and I think I'm more addicted than I've ever been, beautifully written, great rhyming in what I would consider a free verse with rhyme, well done, brilliantly written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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It's a great entry in this "I can't stop," contest. You're absolutely right, I've been here for near ten years now, and I think I'm more addicted than I've ever been, beautifully written, great rhyming in what I would consider a free verse with rhyme, well done, brilliantly written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks Roy - your description of 'free verse with rhyme' allows for all sorts of irregularities that my poem displays.
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That's right
