Amazing grace
Thankful for His ...27 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful 1-6-1 poem! I'm glad I perused your profile today to see your expert use of internal and end rhymes and repeated assonance to create this spiritual poem with the very difficult structure!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Wonderful 1-6-1 poem! I'm glad I perused your profile today to see your expert use of internal and end rhymes and repeated assonance to create this spiritual poem with the very difficult structure!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Helen - thank you so much! Especially as it has expired and you got nothing. It means a lot to me that you liked it enough to review. Many thanks for your congratulations, and for the beautiful flowers! All greatly appreciated.
Wendy
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Congratulations on all your recent wins, Wendy! You're doing fabulous work!! 💖💖 Sorry to be late in recognizing your wins!
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your encouragement. I don't really count myself a writer as I have only been doing it consistently for a year, before that just here and there. I have found this site to be very stimulating and it helps me to be creative, and to learn and grow seeing the quality, variety and style of other people's work. Including yours!
Hugs to you.
Wendy
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So glad you're here! 💖
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery author. Your words plus image pair perfectly. Your poem read smooth with good imagery and rhymes. I like the way you formatted the lines and the color scheme, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery author. Your words plus image pair perfectly. Your poem read smooth with good imagery and rhymes. I like the way you formatted the lines and the color scheme, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing, Jan. I very much appreciate your lovely words and good wishes.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a simple, but meaningful poem packed in a few words. It shows the power of faith.
I like the internal and end rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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This is a simple, but meaningful poem packed in a few words. It shows the power of faith.
I like the internal and end rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful and encouraging review, and good wishes.
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You are most kindly welcome, Wendy.
Joan
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well done. I am impressed by how you are able to explain the abundant grace of God with this beautiful poem. Thought the way you explained His grace 1. You saw it for yourself. 2. You were flabbergasted by how a Supernatural savior shows mankind so much favor. 3. You praise Jesus for bestowing this grace that defies human understanding. Wonderful work with this piece.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Well done. I am impressed by how you are able to explain the abundant grace of God with this beautiful poem. Thought the way you explained His grace 1. You saw it for yourself. 2. You were flabbergasted by how a Supernatural savior shows mankind so much favor. 3. You praise Jesus for bestowing this grace that defies human understanding. Wonderful work with this piece.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and lovely review. Much appreciated. Yes, you followed my train of thought exactly.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Hitcher
having to rhyme all thee lines is not an easy task when you have only 8 syllables to play with. I'd say you managed it nicely. Your spiritual offering didn't seem forced and flowed freely. Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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having to rhyme all thee lines is not an easy task when you have only 8 syllables to play with. I'd say you managed it nicely. Your spiritual offering didn't seem forced and flowed freely. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much. Yes, it is harder than it first seems to say something meaningful with eight syllables, which include three rhymes. Thanks for your good wishes too. Appreciated.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Your three lined poem Amazing Grace with these words
gazed when someone was amazed
at face of grace - amazed when he saw Our Lords face
praised and he praised the Lord and gave thanks
Nice image of Jesus.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Your three lined poem Amazing Grace with these words
gazed when someone was amazed
at face of grace - amazed when he saw Our Lords face
praised and he praised the Lord and gave thanks
Nice image of Jesus.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Gert, for your thoughtful review.
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You are most welcome
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent use of rhyme in this three line poem. I really liked the assonance of the letter "a" throughout the poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Excellent use of rhyme in this three line poem. I really liked the assonance of the letter "a" throughout the poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you Janet for your thoughtful and encouraging review! Appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Yes, when John Newton gave that ballad style, 8686 waltz beat song, as simple as, and yet so profound, from a repentant, once slave trader's grateful heart, he left a legacy like none other. Beautifully written 1/6/1, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Yes, when John Newton gave that ballad style, 8686 waltz beat song, as simple as, and yet so profound, from a repentant, once slave trader's grateful heart, he left a legacy like none other. Beautifully written 1/6/1, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate your review.
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Well done
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-chosen six words describe how all should feel upon learning about the Lord and His amazing grace and love--with the response of belief and praise.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Your well-chosen six words describe how all should feel upon learning about the Lord and His amazing grace and love--with the response of belief and praise.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Janice. A lovely review, appreciated!
Comment from palmart
As any very-short-poem, your writing is direct and explicit. Words look like surgically - chosen to express your message. I felt your message as positive and prosperous. Wish you the best luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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As any very-short-poem, your writing is direct and explicit. Words look like surgically - chosen to express your message. I felt your message as positive and prosperous. Wish you the best luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your lovely review, and good wishes. Appreciated.
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You are welcome, Writer!
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You are really welcome, Wendy! Have a great rest of the weekend!!
