Amazing grace
Thankful for His ...27 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poem is both clever and creative, and follows the exact rhyming pattern as the example given. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly providing an overall great presentation. As far as your topic, I say AMEN. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
Your poem is both clever and creative, and follows the exact rhyming pattern as the example given. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly providing an overall great presentation. As far as your topic, I say AMEN. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review and for your good wishes. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is an amazing poem. It starts with "gazed". gaze at what? Grace !
Grace is a noble virtue. It certainly deserves to be praised.
This is a good entry for the competition.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
This is an amazing poem. It starts with "gazed". gaze at what? Grace !
Grace is a noble virtue. It certainly deserves to be praised.
This is a good entry for the competition.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. Appreciated.
Comment from karenina
Nice job conveying faith and hope in eight tiny syllables! Not easy to capture such a theme and touch the heart and soul of the reader...but you've done it quite well I'd say! Best of luck to you in the contest!
(Love the image you've selected)
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
Nice job conveying faith and hope in eight tiny syllables! Not easy to capture such a theme and touch the heart and soul of the reader...but you've done it quite well I'd say! Best of luck to you in the contest!
(Love the image you've selected)
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much Karenina for your very supportive and encouraging review, and good wishes. Much appreciated.
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I always am impressed by those that can make something of import from a 1-6-1 form. You've done it well!
Karenina
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Thank you so much, you are so very kind!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Raul. I appreciate your lovely wordsa nd encouragement.
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You're welcome!
Comment from robi_mac
I like that in faith we can see the face of compassion & love, it is good that it is left to one's own thought, just how mere we are when set before the alter of awesome, Only could there praise there be, thank you for your poem....Robi
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
I like that in faith we can see the face of compassion & love, it is good that it is left to one's own thought, just how mere we are when set before the alter of awesome, Only could there praise there be, thank you for your poem....Robi
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Robi. What lovely words and encouragement.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a lovely 1-6-1 entry. I especially like the artwork - so ethereal. You did well with the form and I wish you luck in the competition. You had a very short form to work with and you beautifully.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
What a lovely 1-6-1 entry. I especially like the artwork - so ethereal. You did well with the form and I wish you luck in the competition. You had a very short form to work with and you beautifully.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Sherry! A lovely review, very encouraging. Thanks too for your good wishes.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very skillfully constructed short poem with deep meaning! If we ask God for a calm, thankful heart that sees all the blessings His grace imparts, He will definitely oblige. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
A very skillfully constructed short poem with deep meaning! If we ask God for a calm, thankful heart that sees all the blessings His grace imparts, He will definitely oblige. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Seshradi! A fine review, and greatly appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Very good opening and
closing words, along with the rhyme.
-A positive message about
what His grace can do.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Very good opening and
closing words, along with the rhyme.
-A positive message about
what His grace can do.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Pam for your encouraging and thoughtful review, and good wishes. All are valued.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from jwsteele
gazed
at face of grace - amazed ...
praised
The picture and the poem create a strong image. Very apropos. This poem speaks of unwavering faith and devotion
Well expressed.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
gazed
at face of grace - amazed ...
praised
The picture and the poem create a strong image. Very apropos. This poem speaks of unwavering faith and devotion
Well expressed.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your positive review. Appreciated.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem stirred emotions in me, it is how I feel whenever I pray or see our Lord. Your words are powerful and makes the reader want to break out in song, hence the title amazing grace. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
Your poem stirred emotions in me, it is how I feel whenever I pray or see our Lord. Your words are powerful and makes the reader want to break out in song, hence the title amazing grace. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Oh that is a wonderful review. Glad to hear you have been blessed by my few words. Many thanks.