A shotgun wedding
You, me and baby makes three7 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
Nice, quick and makes the point with rhyme too. Like and a great pic selection to go with. Keep up the good work. And happy writing. .................
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
Nice, quick and makes the point with rhyme too. Like and a great pic selection to go with. Keep up the good work. And happy writing. .................
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much. Jen.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ooh, I like this senryu type poem. It rhymes well to portray a theme that is every so present in society today, unfortunately. A great picture to help this piece along. I can see why it is the Winner - CONGRATULATIONS.
~DD
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
Ooh, I like this senryu type poem. It rhymes well to portray a theme that is every so present in society today, unfortunately. A great picture to help this piece along. I can see why it is the Winner - CONGRATULATIONS.
~DD
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks Diana. Not many shotgun weddings nowadays. It seems anything goes. Have a nice day. Jen.
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Congrats! Well done All the best. The supportive photograph is excellent. You were adherent to the 5-7-5 requirement. And your three lines produced a clear statement with an honorable message. Excellent!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
Congrats! Well done All the best. The supportive photograph is excellent. You were adherent to the 5-7-5 requirement. And your three lines produced a clear statement with an honorable message. Excellent!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I really appreciate it. Jen.
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Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I really appreciate it. All the best. Jen.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet
You now have 6 votes!
Your entry definitely stood out from the rest.
It's creative and I enjoyed the read.
Good artwork choice too.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
Ciao mystery poet
You now have 6 votes!
Your entry definitely stood out from the rest.
It's creative and I enjoyed the read.
Good artwork choice too.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Ciao to you too.
Thank you so much for the vote and great review.
Comment from Eunice Amero
It has to be a senryu type. I love the picture. So if you have time write something that menas recently married. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
It has to be a senryu type. I love the picture. So if you have time write something that menas recently married. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks
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Welcome
Comment from T B Botts
Are there still such things as shotgun weddings? I would imagine it would only occur if the guilty party got cold feet. Not the ideal way to start a marriage, but God knows how many marriages came about because of a little one on the way. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Tom
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
Are there still such things as shotgun weddings? I would imagine it would only occur if the guilty party got cold feet. Not the ideal way to start a marriage, but God knows how many marriages came about because of a little one on the way. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Tom
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A ribald answer to the prompt. The flow is good. The poem meets the guidelines. The humor is catchy. The picture adds to the poem. The language is simple, but forceful.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
A ribald answer to the prompt. The flow is good. The poem meets the guidelines. The humor is catchy. The picture adds to the poem. The language is simple, but forceful.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Many thanks
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You are welcome.