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The Song Of You

For someone special

8 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem of a love that bursts out into music. The best gifts are the personal ones - such as a song written for some-one. A lovely entry, with fine rhyme and carefully crafted smooth flow. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a vibrant and lively write filled with the music of love and those symphonies that create a bonding atmosphere, good rhymes and sentiments, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
    Thank you for this nice review, I always value your opinion. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Exceptional
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This is such a beautiful poem. The person you wrote this for must feel very special. It is so heartfelt and I just love it so much. Thank you so much for sharing this!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from ESOSTINE
Exceptional
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I felt touched by the natural flow of the poem. Well paced and measured. It made me smile as I read through, thinking of the heights love can take all true lovers. Beautifully penned. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    It came from the heart about someone dear to me. I'm honored by this stellar review and I'm so glad you liked it....Thank you. :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
Excellent
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That is a very good poem. The rhyme scheme is unforced and pure. Your meter is great - just a couple of very minor blips (no change necessary). Should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Exceptional
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The person you wrote this about must be very special. You wrote a lovely poem and they are truly lucky to have you. I love the love it conveying in each line and I love the picture you choose. Six stars

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Wow! This is fantastic, thank you for this stellar review. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is a lovely poem and the message is sincere and moving. You have excellent rhyme and meter and the imagery is quite vivid, I also like the picture you've chosen. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Word Junkie
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Hello Poet,

This chipper poem flows well and rhymes well. Word choice was good throughout. The last line is a bit rough but I can't really think of a way to smooth the rhythm out. It's just a thought.

Thanks for sharing this and I wish you well in the contest,
~Lana

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)