Rumpy Pumpy
A short poem.4 total reviews
Comment from GregoryCody
Wow. I mean wow. Not only is it in perfect form but it's so natural. Fluid. Really flows well.
Okay now to the subject. Haha. It actually moved me. That's crazy in so many words. Pumping pleased. Great tools used btw. Alliteration. But yes. Very very moving. Great job.
This is DEFINITELY a six. I'm going to read it again ;)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Wow. I mean wow. Not only is it in perfect form but it's so natural. Fluid. Really flows well.
Okay now to the subject. Haha. It actually moved me. That's crazy in so many words. Pumping pleased. Great tools used btw. Alliteration. But yes. Very very moving. Great job.
This is DEFINITELY a six. I'm going to read it again ;)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the enthusiastic review and the extra shiny star ..
It took some time to get this format right .. I have had several entries disqualified.
( sigh)
The birds and bees talk is alway entertaining. ( biggrin)
Best wish for a peaceful Sunday!
Ciao!
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There are a lot of times in these. It's hard to actually nail it. This is great and it fits (as far as I read and counted).
Great job!
Why were any disqualified?
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Well you got MY vote mystery writer! You're in second place I hope you win!
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Thank you ! I appreciate the support.
I voted for Lessons Learnt earlier today so the contest page opened
. and I saw I had one vote .. I was a bit disappointed but there are some interesting entries so there is competition ( biggrin)
Take care!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with this inventive write and I loved the matching rhyming words in this pleasurable pursuit of happiness, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with this inventive write and I loved the matching rhyming words in this pleasurable pursuit of happiness, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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I?m glad my wee poem made you chuckle .
It?s a topic most can connect to so I dared ..it?s a bit naughty ( biggrin)
Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from phill doran
Yes, well. I have no idea what is being referred to here, and if the room is getting warmed, well, that must be due to climate change...
Hello Anon.
Very funny - and within the form too. I think you may have meant to end it 'ceased' as in 'stopped' rather than 'seized' as in 'grabbed'? I apologise if I have misread you.
cheers - stay safe
phill
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Yes, well. I have no idea what is being referred to here, and if the room is getting warmed, well, that must be due to climate change...
Hello Anon.
Very funny - and within the form too. I think you may have meant to end it 'ceased' as in 'stopped' rather than 'seized' as in 'grabbed'? I apologise if I have misread you.
cheers - stay safe
phill
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the helpful feedback.
Yes it meant ceased ..stopped
my English is not up to scratch? there are so many words that sound the same but the spelling and meaning are different .
Stay safe!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Tyburn poetry contest writing prompt entry speaks in sequences her activity with ultimately her vigorous action matured; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, Worship Month November. ALCREATOR
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This Tyburn poetry contest writing prompt entry speaks in sequences her activity with ultimately her vigorous action matured; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, Worship Month November. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
