You and I
Just breathe3 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
Ooooooh! I love this sweet little 5/7/5 you have penned for the contest! Love the rhyming and the picture! Great job! And thank ypy for sharing this with us
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Ooooooh! I love this sweet little 5/7/5 you have penned for the contest! Love the rhyming and the picture! Great job! And thank ypy for sharing this with us
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Thank you for another great review, it's so awesome to hear from you. :)
Comment from egomega
Very evocative poem that expresses the sensation of passion and delight that lovers feel. Not an easy thing to do to do in so few words. Well done. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Very evocative poem that expresses the sensation of passion and delight that lovers feel. Not an easy thing to do to do in so few words. Well done. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You succeeded in telling a love story in so few words. Good job. The picture nicely represents the story. Best of luck with your writing and in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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You succeeded in telling a love story in so few words. Good job. The picture nicely represents the story. Best of luck with your writing and in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thank you, that's so kind if you. I appreciate you reading my poem.:)
