Morning, Noon, and Night
Give me kisses...13 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of thé poem reminisces thé merit of cultivating and perpetuating proven intimacy inducing motifs as à via média for creating à lasting love affair.
Thé work highlights thé primacy of kisses as viable émotional motifs in that direction.
Thé work earns its texture through thé use of métaphors, à rhythmic interjection of kisses and allitérations.
An intimacy inspiring work akin to thé thème of Roméo and Juliet, albeit devoid of intrigues.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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The objective correlative of thé poem reminisces thé merit of cultivating and perpetuating proven intimacy inducing motifs as à via média for creating à lasting love affair.
Thé work highlights thé primacy of kisses as viable émotional motifs in that direction.
Thé work earns its texture through thé use of métaphors, à rhythmic interjection of kisses and allitérations.
An intimacy inspiring work akin to thé thème of Roméo and Juliet, albeit devoid of intrigues.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this great analysis of my poem, it's very interesting and welcome. Thanks for reading. :)
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Remain Blessés.
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Remain Blessed.
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Remain Blessed.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from lancellot
This is very sweet and has a nice alternating rhyme scheme. I see why it got second place in the contest. You wrote the kind of tenderness more seniors enjoy imagining and participating in. There is nothing I can add. It's is great work.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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This is very sweet and has a nice alternating rhyme scheme. I see why it got second place in the contest. You wrote the kind of tenderness more seniors enjoy imagining and participating in. There is nothing I can add. It's is great work.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you, I really appreciate this very nice review. :)
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I like this entry for the - Kiss writing prompt - contest.
It is well rhymed and is creative in the clever approach of receiving a
kiss from a true love each morning, afternoon and night. The day spent busy smooching... ahh, them were the days of young love. Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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I like this entry for the - Kiss writing prompt - contest.
It is well rhymed and is creative in the clever approach of receiving a
kiss from a true love each morning, afternoon and night. The day spent busy smooching... ahh, them were the days of young love. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Morning, Noon, and Night
by Boogienights
Great entry for the Kiss writing prompt contest. So romantic. Kissing morning, day, and night is perfect with the right person. I love your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Morning, Noon, and Night
by Boogienights
Great entry for the Kiss writing prompt contest. So romantic. Kissing morning, day, and night is perfect with the right person. I love your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thank you. I was lucky enough to meet the right person, so it's kisses all day. I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from MissMerri
A perfectly beautiful and love-filled poem, Boogie, and I'm glad it got a lot of votes because it was certainly deserving. I was glad to see this one belonged to you. Congratulations for posting a top winner. I loved the theme and the way you spelled it out. Very nice!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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A perfectly beautiful and love-filled poem, Boogie, and I'm glad it got a lot of votes because it was certainly deserving. I was glad to see this one belonged to you. Congratulations for posting a top winner. I loved the theme and the way you spelled it out. Very nice!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, and congratulations to you for your first place win. It's a beautiful poem. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a nice entry for the dating contest. A nice thought to share kisses throughout the day and every day. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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This is a nice entry for the dating contest. A nice thought to share kisses throughout the day and every day. Your rhyme and rhythm are perfect. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Annette R.
Sweet and gentle kisses lasting throughout the day - what a vision. The picture is perfect for the poem. I like a poem that rhymes though I'm not good at writing them. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Sweet and gentle kisses lasting throughout the day - what a vision. The picture is perfect for the poem. I like a poem that rhymes though I'm not good at writing them. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you for such a nice review, it made my night. :)
Comment from Annette R.
Sweet and gentle kisses lasting throughout the day - what a vision. The picture is perfect for the poem. I like a poem that rhymes though I'm not good at writing them. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Sweet and gentle kisses lasting throughout the day - what a vision. The picture is perfect for the poem. I like a poem that rhymes though I'm not good at writing them. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely poem to celebrate love and kisses. The kissing expresses continuous and on-going love and commitment. Best wishes for your fine entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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A lovely poem to celebrate love and kisses. The kissing expresses continuous and on-going love and commitment. Best wishes for your fine entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you for being so kind, I really appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a wonderful poem about the joys of kissing! You make it sound like a sweet treat! So romantic and sensual! Wonderful job! I believe this will do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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This is a wonderful poem about the joys of kissing! You make it sound like a sweet treat! So romantic and sensual! Wonderful job! I believe this will do well in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks for this fantastic review, it's very appreciated. :)
