Comment from RodG

Excellent

I envision the Speaker being a newly-wed who is thrilled by her spouse's kisses any time of day. You definitely capture the ROMANTIC MOOD and delight us with description of those through-out the day kisses. Rod

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thank you for reading ny poem and for this terrific review, both sre appreciated. :)

Comment from fayesh

Excellent

A lovely poem of a couple that kisses throughout the day. I think I would revisit the fourth stanza, last line. It just feels awkward. I would recommend you change it to "my love, your scent so sweet."

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

That's an excellent suggestion, I changed that line. I appreciate your feedback and for taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We often take kisses for granted and only when we are not kissed anymore do we truly miss them. Here there is much kissing going on morning noon and night, a delightful read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review. :)