Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Football Chapter 32 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
31 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
My apologies for being so far behind....
The reader feels the honest emotions and also learns that communication is the foundation of any great and lasting relationship. You show a family who is changing, learning and trusting each other step by step. Very well done!
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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My apologies for being so far behind....
The reader feels the honest emotions and also learns that communication is the foundation of any great and lasting relationship. You show a family who is changing, learning and trusting each other step by step. Very well done!
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Great job from the beginning to the end makes me want to catch up on the rest thank you again for sharing this intriguing read stay inspired and keep writing
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Great job from the beginning to the end makes me want to catch up on the rest thank you again for sharing this intriguing read stay inspired and keep writing
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Soledadpaz
I see things are progressing slowly between Katharine and. Gabriel. They speak of love. Though he feels he's not good enough because he's a jock.
Can't imagine how you could live a normal life with someone spying on you all the time, but the boys seem well-adjusted.
Hope you get some good news on your wrist.
Sol
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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I see things are progressing slowly between Katharine and. Gabriel. They speak of love. Though he feels he's not good enough because he's a jock.
Can't imagine how you could live a normal life with someone spying on you all the time, but the boys seem well-adjusted.
Hope you get some good news on your wrist.
Sol
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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I don't think the boys are fully aware of the spying. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
What a beautiful and Wonderfully written story .I'm so glad you were able to find love again and so so sorry for all the bull crap you had to endure .You sound like a wonderful person . Thank you for sharing your lovely story
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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What a beautiful and Wonderfully written story .I'm so glad you were able to find love again and so so sorry for all the bull crap you had to endure .You sound like a wonderful person . Thank you for sharing your lovely story
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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It was my pleasure
Comment from prettybluebirds
The remark your husband made about your broken wrist was a typical man comment. I recall my husband saying such things. I can't get back at him now because he passed away 2 years ago. LOL. I like your story and am sure things will work out for the best as the novel progresses. I can see why you are in the #5 spot on the rankings. Great work.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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The remark your husband made about your broken wrist was a typical man comment. I recall my husband saying such things. I can't get back at him now because he passed away 2 years ago. LOL. I like your story and am sure things will work out for the best as the novel progresses. I can see why you are in the #5 spot on the rankings. Great work.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like the saying the calm before the storm. Probably you'll published this into a book when completed. It is romantic and a love story. I feel like Katherine does need some space to breathe, too. But I'm glad she is not alone.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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I like the saying the calm before the storm. Probably you'll published this into a book when completed. It is romantic and a love story. I feel like Katherine does need some space to breathe, too. But I'm glad she is not alone.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Impressive wording; captivating flow almost throughout from top to bottom; the story is moving ahead in an interesting way.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Impressive wording; captivating flow almost throughout from top to bottom; the story is moving ahead in an interesting way.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Barbara.Wilkey, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Exceptional story my friend! BRAVO! The storyline keeps me captivated, waiting and Anticipating what would happen or be said next! I adored the characters as well;-) Well written and well thought out! I loved the imagery chosen too;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Exceptional story my friend! BRAVO! The storyline keeps me captivated, waiting and Anticipating what would happen or be said next! I adored the characters as well;-) Well written and well thought out! I loved the imagery chosen too;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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;-)
Comment from Melissa Place
Excellent story. Good character development. Love it. Keep more coming. Best wishes on all of your writing endeavors. Excellent! Good luck with your doctor's appointment!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Excellent story. Good character development. Love it. Keep more coming. Best wishes on all of your writing endeavors. Excellent! Good luck with your doctor's appointment!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
This is a great chapter in your romance fiction Football. I love the abundance of intriguing conversations along with detailed imagery. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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This is a great chapter in your romance fiction Football. I love the abundance of intriguing conversations along with detailed imagery. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
