Comment from Boogienights

Exceptional

I really love this poem. As I read it I noticed it reminded me of a rap. Just the cadence of it. I Can see this being performed on stage. It is a very powerful piece. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Boogienights,

I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Your input means so much? thank you for such a stellar review and for the gift of six too :))

Have a wonderful week.
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Boogienights,

I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. Your input means so much? thank you for such a stellar review and for the gift of six too :))

Have a wonderful week.
Senyai

Comment from Charlene Pratt

Excellent

Loved this Senyai especially regarding our emotions. So true our emotions seemed like oceans in our youth and now, seriously just puddles. Really enjoyed the last line, up to our ears and sinking!!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Charlene,

I appreciate your input so much and for a stellar review. So happy you enjoyed my poem! Thank you.

Have a wonderful coming week :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Charlene,

I appreciate your input so much and for a stellar review. So happy you enjoyed my poem! Thank you.

Have a wonderful coming week :))
Senyai

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I follow the trails, signs and vague road maps. Wearing only flimsy flip flops on my feet; I wade through murky waters and dead end at a mud puddle. Finally, "guess what" love is the answer. Love it. di

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Diana,

Ahh, I hear ya! Life is a TRIP lol. Thanks for the stellar review and thoughts!

Stay well and have a wonderful week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Diana,

Ahh, I hear ya! Life is a TRIP lol. Thanks for the stellar review and thoughts!

Stay well and have a wonderful week,
Senyai

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Delightfully constructed rhymed and metred couplets. Your thesis clearly stated with the gentle motif and aging desire.

Love this very much, Senyai. It reads so naturally. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Gloria,

Oh my! I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate your stellar review and thoughts as your input means so much.

Also thank you for the little gift of six, too!

Have a wonderful week, Gloria :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Gloria,

Oh my! I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate your stellar review and thoughts as your input means so much.

Also thank you for the little gift of six, too!

Have a wonderful week, Gloria :))
Senyai

Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

A nice rhyming poem. Nice photos too. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. I love reading many kinds of poetry. Keep up the great work. Have a great weekend.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Pookietoo,

Thank you for such a warm review and thoughts. Much appreciate your time to read and assess my work.

Have a great week, Pookietoo :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Pookietoo,

Thank you for such a warm review and thoughts. Much appreciate your time to read and assess my work.

Have a great week, Pookietoo :))
Senyai

reply by pookietoo on 14-Nov-2021

Welcome.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is both sweet and sad too in a way. It is nice and wonder to be able to share the memories of the glory days spent together when a couple was young and full fire and desire. And when the body is no longer able, you still have yesterday and the slow warmth of love.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Lance,

Wow, this is such a nice review and thoughts. You are so right, but not a sad thing really getting older?remember seasoned and aged wine is best :))

Your thoughts were truly stellar. Thank you.

Have a wonderful week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Lance,

Wow, this is such a nice review and thoughts. You are so right, but not a sad thing really getting older?remember seasoned and aged wine is best :))

Your thoughts were truly stellar. Thank you.

Have a wonderful week,
Senyai

Comment from J.Lancaster

Excellent

I'm not what many would consider to be old (hell, I just got out of my teen years) and even I can relate to this. Masterfully put, the imagery in this is astounding. I actually expected it to be a bit more melancholy and was surprised to realize it was sweet and beautiful. Gives me the warm fuzzies. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi J Lancaster,

For just having left the teenaged years, I must say your perception is stellar :)).

So glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you for a most interesting in-depth review and thoughts. Thank you!

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi J Lancaster,

For just having left the teenaged years, I must say your perception is stellar :)).

So glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you for a most interesting in-depth review and thoughts. Thank you!

Always,
Senyai

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' Where Is My Desire ? ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Duchess,

Hope you are faring well these days. I appreciate your lovely review and thoughts?thanks for your valuable input, too.

Have a wonderful week :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Duchess,

Hope you are faring well these days. I appreciate your lovely review and thoughts?thanks for your valuable input, too.

Have a wonderful week :))
Senyai

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Senyai,

You're welcome. I'm faring well and hope you're the same.

Bless you take care and have a great
week,
the Duchess

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I love this, and I can relate so well to what you have written in this rhyming poem! The beautiful goldenrods in bloom are a wonderful gift from heaven! I love the choice of rhymes and the choice of phrases speaking on aging! I am 67 years young as they say! Old enough to know better and young enough to still care!
Desires are still with me and I am grateful for this! I still have it when I want it, though the works aren't as spectacular anymore!
Have a sensual day,
Jesse

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Jesse,

Oh thank you for a stellar review and thoughts. Your input is most valuable and means so much. Thank you, Jesse :))

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Jesse,

Oh thank you for a stellar review and thoughts. Your input is most valuable and means so much. Thank you, Jesse :))

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a delicious use of words which adds to the feel and flow of your words. My favorite line is "when our emotions were oceans,now are little muddle puddles". It shows how we change when we age. Excellent rhyming of words that also adds a musical feel to your words.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Mermaids,

Love this review! Thank you for your stellar review and thoughts on my poem?so happy you enjoyed as your input is always welcome :))

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Hi Mermaids,

Love this review! Thank you for your stellar review and thoughts on my poem?so happy you enjoyed as your input is always welcome :))

Have a great week,
Senyai