Where is My Desire?
On aging -54 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Beautiful pictures you have chosen of the Goldenrod. Like how you have used it as an illustration in your poem of how life passes so quickly and we find ourselves in the autumn of our lives.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Beautiful pictures you have chosen of the Goldenrod. Like how you have used it as an illustration in your poem of how life passes so quickly and we find ourselves in the autumn of our lives.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Hi Anne,
Yes, time seems to pass ever so quickly these days, doesn?t it, Anne? ?.
The holidays are upon us once again. Thanks as always for your time to read and assess my work as it is always a treat to hear from you!
Take care and stay healthy :))
Always,
Senyai
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You are welcome
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Ah, I love this! Sweetness and looking back on lover's times. We may grow older, but we hang onto our memories and wrap ourselves in them from time to time. The picture is beautiful and fits your words so well.
Excellent presentation!
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Ah, I love this! Sweetness and looking back on lover's times. We may grow older, but we hang onto our memories and wrap ourselves in them from time to time. The picture is beautiful and fits your words so well.
Excellent presentation!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Hi Sherry,
Oh thank you very much! I had shelved this poem but drew it out, dusted it off and opted to revise here and there. Always love your reviews, Sherry :))
Planning to fan you as I thought I already had ?
Have a great Friday and many thanks for your insight once again. Stay well, my friend.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Sherry,
Oh thank you very much! I had shelved this poem but drew it out, dusted it off and opted to revise here and there. Always love your reviews, Sherry :))
Planning to fan you as I thought I already had ?
Have a great Friday and many thanks for your insight once again. Stay well, my friend.
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Terry Broxson
What a lovely poem about aging. I thing it is a good entry for the contest, and good luck. I like everything about the second verse. I do love the image of the little mud puddles! Great job.
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What a lovely poem about aging. I thing it is a good entry for the contest, and good luck. I like everything about the second verse. I do love the image of the little mud puddles! Great job.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Hi Terry,
Oh my, I thank you so much for your stellar review and kind words. Your insight is greatly appreciated.
Have a great Friday, my friend :))
Senyai
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Hi Terry,
Oh my, I thank you so much for your stellar review and kind words. Your insight is greatly appreciated.
Have a great Friday, my friend :))
Senyai
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious! Delightful nostalgic romp, charmingly whimsical and freshly phrased. Rich in imagery vividly evocative of reminiscences of days of youth. Wonderful piece!
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Glorious! Delightful nostalgic romp, charmingly whimsical and freshly phrased. Rich in imagery vividly evocative of reminiscences of days of youth. Wonderful piece!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Hi Liz,
Such a glowing review has me glowing! I always appreciate your insight and appreciate your unique and overly qualified thoughts on my work. LOL
Yes, aging is a wonderful thing really as youthful angst fizzles and slips of the tongue are more easily forgiven with ? "Well after all they are getting up in years."
Always fun to hear from you and praying for your daughter. Wishing her a short lived case of CoVid? none of the long haulers please.
Yep, the Delta variant is a nasty one, Liz. You be safe out there, too :))
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Liz,
Such a glowing review has me glowing! I always appreciate your insight and appreciate your unique and overly qualified thoughts on my work. LOL
Yes, aging is a wonderful thing really as youthful angst fizzles and slips of the tongue are more easily forgiven with ? "Well after all they are getting up in years."
Always fun to hear from you and praying for your daughter. Wishing her a short lived case of CoVid? none of the long haulers please.
Yep, the Delta variant is a nasty one, Liz. You be safe out there, too :))
Always,
Senyai
Comment from royowen
I never knew about this marvellous flower that could be turned into a medicinal tea, but it seems to me that God gave us all we need to live happy, healthy lives, enough food to satisfy our children's need, and provide us a long and healthy lives, "I pray that you will prosper in all things even as your soul prospers"
3 John:2, beautifully written Senyai, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I never knew about this marvellous flower that could be turned into a medicinal tea, but it seems to me that God gave us all we need to live happy, healthy lives, enough food to satisfy our children's need, and provide us a long and healthy lives, "I pray that you will prosper in all things even as your soul prospers"
3 John:2, beautifully written Senyai, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Roy,
Oh, thanks so much for this glowing review and warm thoughts! Yes, goldenrod tea is fairly tart but really tasty and healing. Who knew? :))
Thanks for your thoughts as it is always so good to hear from you.
Happy Thursday, sir
Always,
Senyai
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Well done
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Hi Roy,
Oh, thanks so much for this glowing review and warm thoughts! Yes, goldenrod tea is fairly tart but really tasty and healing. Who knew? :))
Thanks for your thoughts as it is always so good to hear from you.
Happy Thursday, sir
Always,
Senyai
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this rhyming contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading the rhymes. I've read a few entries for this contest today and one of them I struggled finding the rhymes. Not in this poem. Thank you. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for sharing this rhyming contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading the rhymes. I've read a few entries for this contest today and one of them I struggled finding the rhymes. Not in this poem. Thank you. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Barbara,
Thank you so much for your kind words on my poem. Your input is valuable and means so much. I appreciate your time to read and assess my work.
Happy Thursday :))
Senyai
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Hi Barbara,
Thank you so much for your kind words on my poem. Your input is valuable and means so much. I appreciate your time to read and assess my work.
Happy Thursday :))
Senyai
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
On aging -
Where is My Desire?
by Senyai
Excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem contest. We all deal with aging in our own ways. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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On aging -
Where is My Desire?
by Senyai
Excellent entry for the Rhyming Poem contest. We all deal with aging in our own ways. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Gypsy,
Oh thank you kindly for such a delightful review and thoughts. I always appreciate your unique input, Gypsy.
So appreciative of your time to read and review.
Happy Thursday my friend,
Senyai
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Hi Gypsy,
Oh thank you kindly for such a delightful review and thoughts. I always appreciate your unique input, Gypsy.
So appreciative of your time to read and review.
Happy Thursday my friend,
Senyai
Comment from Theodore McDowell
What a lovely and lyrical poem. Great for the rhyming contest and the rhymes weren't intrusive or stifling (as you know, I'm not a big fan of end rhymes, but these were as good as that style can get). Bittersweet, nostalgic, content and joyous simultaneously. A nice mix of emotions going on in this poem. Great job. Hope all is well. P.S. have you started the beta read? No rush.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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What a lovely and lyrical poem. Great for the rhyming contest and the rhymes weren't intrusive or stifling (as you know, I'm not a big fan of end rhymes, but these were as good as that style can get). Bittersweet, nostalgic, content and joyous simultaneously. A nice mix of emotions going on in this poem. Great job. Hope all is well. P.S. have you started the beta read? No rush.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Tim,
Thanks for the review and thoughts. I know, end rhymes can sound so trite. I had it stored away so thought I?d get rid of it in the nicest way possible ? a contest :))
No, I am about to finish Jay?s book three of his trilogy, The Trinings. It is so so good, Tim. Did you beta read all three books? I have been super busy with work as orders start coming in fast and furious around the holidays so my time to read is cut a bit short of late but hopefully a new hire will relieve the madness in a few weeks.
I will start on yours real soon and am super excited to begin on Rust Quill?s story, Tim. My attention won?t be divided this bad as things get sorted out.
Thanks for the thoughts!
Oh, I am keeping Karenina in my prayers. Her surgery is today. I?ve got my fingers crossed all goes well for her. If you hear any news, please let me know and I?ll do the same.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Tim,
Thanks for the review and thoughts. I know, end rhymes can sound so trite. I had it stored away so thought I?d get rid of it in the nicest way possible ? a contest :))
No, I am about to finish Jay?s book three of his trilogy, The Trinings. It is so so good, Tim. Did you beta read all three books? I have been super busy with work as orders start coming in fast and furious around the holidays so my time to read is cut a bit short of late but hopefully a new hire will relieve the madness in a few weeks.
I will start on yours real soon and am super excited to begin on Rust Quill?s story, Tim. My attention won?t be divided this bad as things get sorted out.
Thanks for the thoughts!
Oh, I am keeping Karenina in my prayers. Her surgery is today. I?ve got my fingers crossed all goes well for her. If you hear any news, please let me know and I?ll do the same.
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Where Is My Desire?, follows us all through the glory days to these hoary days of age. We can still swim with the sharks, but they are really grandchildren little pitchforks. Skydiving will now be from the front seat of a pickup truck.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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This poem, Where Is My Desire?, follows us all through the glory days to these hoary days of age. We can still swim with the sharks, but they are really grandchildren little pitchforks. Skydiving will now be from the front seat of a pickup truck.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Bill,
Hahaha! Skydiving from the front seat of a pickup! Note to self * Hilarious!
Yes, aging at whatever age should be like brie or camembert - gouda or cheddar?aging a little or a lot is a good thing. Lol
Thanks for an most entertaining review.
Happy Thursday, my friend!
Senyai
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Hi Bill,
Hahaha! Skydiving from the front seat of a pickup! Note to self * Hilarious!
Yes, aging at whatever age should be like brie or camembert - gouda or cheddar?aging a little or a lot is a good thing. Lol
Thanks for an most entertaining review.
Happy Thursday, my friend!
Senyai
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, Rhyming Poem contest entry, speaks on aging, and asks the garden where is poet's desire, remembering of old days, well said, well done; thanks for sharing, feel good reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast, time's limited, dear, I, DR, 114 book writer, festive month November. A L C R E A T O R
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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This General Poetry, Rhyming Poem contest entry, speaks on aging, and asks the garden where is poet's desire, remembering of old days, well said, well done; thanks for sharing, feel good reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast, time's limited, dear, I, DR, 114 book writer, festive month November. A L C R E A T O R
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Hi Alcreator,
Thank you for a lovely review and wise words. I appreciate your thoughts and wish you a wonderful Thursday :))
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Alcreator,
Thank you for a lovely review and wise words. I appreciate your thoughts and wish you a wonderful Thursday :))
All the best,
Senyai
