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The American Indians Knew

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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You picked a really outstanding picture and wrote a very nice Naani poem to go with it. However, I question the phrase "knew their place" which has always been used for those who weren't white and Protestant. Could you consider using "value" or something else besides "place"?

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
    Knew their place , means that the American Indians knew that Mother Nature can live without us

    While MANKIND can not..

    Still today our leaders are arrogant and think they can live as they please exploiting Mother Nature.

    Mother Nature rules not US.

    My message has nothing to do with any creed.

    Did you take the time to read my notes snd check out the videos ?

    The message is clear

    Our place is definitely less when compared to Mother Nature


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
    How about this edit :


    White Man called them savages
    yet they held a deep reverence
    for Mother Nature cause they knew she ruled.


reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 14-Nov-2021
    Much better. They don't call her mother nature but it fits with their religious philsophy. Even white men gave the name "Great Spirit" to their beliefs because they did not understand their oneness of man and nature and the creator.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    Okay ..

    do you think I should change Mother Nature to Great Spirit ?

    the syllable count still would fit.
reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 14-Nov-2021
    Mother Nature is actually closer to their sense of life as part of the whole. You have it best as you did it.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    Thank you for your help ..

    I hope you have a nice week !

    You have a cute pooch in your avatar !

    Ciao!
Comment from Eunice Amero
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Yes they do but their God should be the Heavenly God. I am native American and its on my fathers side. His parents were from America. I love America. Thank you for sharing good luck

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
    My message has nothing to dowith any creed..

    What I am trying to say is that American Indians understood that without Mother Nature mankind will not survive ..something our leader have not yet understood or are not willing to acknowledge.

    I thought that was clear .. did you check out my notes snd vids?


reply by Eunice Amero on 12-Nov-2021
    Im so sorry. I should had paid more attention.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry for snapping .. you have a point .. my message should be clear in the poem without having need to read my notes ..

    I edited the poem but I?m not happy ..

    I need more syllables which I don?t have and I have lost interest ..





reply by Eunice Amero on 12-Nov-2021
    you will do well. We all get where we don't feel any sence writing. You had a lovely write up. Take care and do not put yourself down. You are doing well.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Thanks you the encouragement.. I hope you liked the videos .. beautiful yet alarming and our leaders hesitate and are wasting time.

    we are leaving in heritage a dying planet but Mother Nature is rearing her head up snd fighting back ..

    Take care!
reply by Eunice Amero on 12-Nov-2021
    Thank you you are welcome. I never did this before but l need a couple of votes in the one called the night of horrer could you please help. Thank you