Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Christmas Story"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes in the Christmas Poetry contest, Sandra. I really enjoyed the antics of Timmy and Tommy Mouse. They did indeed have a part to play in the birth of Christ as well as all the other critters. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Good luck wishes in the Christmas Poetry contest, Sandra. I really enjoyed the antics of Timmy and Tommy Mouse. They did indeed have a part to play in the birth of Christ as well as all the other critters. This was very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Hi Alie, thank you so very much for this lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Sending you a warm hug, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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You are so very welcome Sandra.
Comment from Teri7
Sandra, This is an adorable Christmas story you have penned about Timmy and Tommy Mouse. You used very good descriptive words and the art work is adorable. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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Sandra, This is an adorable Christmas story you have penned about Timmy and Tommy Mouse. You used very good descriptive words and the art work is adorable. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so very much for this fabulous review and the golden star, Teri! That you enjoyed reading it means a lot. Thanks, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra. xx
Comment from Michele Harber
What a sweet story, Sandra. I love the idea of telling about Christ's birth from the perspective of the animals who witnessed it, and I particularly enjoy the idea of all the animals working together to find a proper bed for the baby. It's a wonderful lesson to teach the children reading or hearing the story. Thank you for providing a holiday smile.
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What a sweet story, Sandra. I love the idea of telling about Christ's birth from the perspective of the animals who witnessed it, and I particularly enjoy the idea of all the animals working together to find a proper bed for the baby. It's a wonderful lesson to teach the children reading or hearing the story. Thank you for providing a holiday smile.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review michele, I'm delighted you enjoyed reading it. Have a lovely week, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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I love children's stories, especially when they're written as sweetly as this one. You certainly gave a new twist to a very old tale.
Comment from Artasylum
This is so wonderful... it filled me full of joy and it flowed like milk and honey down the stream. Thanks for this lovely poem. In a way iit made my day... always look forward Diana.
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This is so wonderful... it filled me full of joy and it flowed like milk and honey down the stream. Thanks for this lovely poem. In a way iit made my day... always look forward Diana.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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I'm delighted you enjoyed this one, Diana, thank you so much for giving it one of your six stars, thats so nice of you. And a big hugs for the lovely review!! Have a wonderful week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from oliver818
This is a great kids poem with lots of excellent rhymes and lovely Christmas imagery for kids to enjoy. I'm sure they will love it. Thanks for sharing this
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This is a great kids poem with lots of excellent rhymes and lovely Christmas imagery for kids to enjoy. I'm sure they will love it. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Oliver. I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandra Mitchell,
Nice piece of Children Poetry incorporating a Christmas Story having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and depicting the birth of Jesus plus the role of related animals and persons in an interesting way.
Pictures enhance beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Hello Sandra Mitchell,
Nice piece of Children Poetry incorporating a Christmas Story having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and depicting the birth of Jesus plus the role of related animals and persons in an interesting way.
Pictures enhance beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and the golden sixth star, RP. I'm delighted you enjoyed it! And thank you for the best of luck wishes!! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Sandra xxx, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Kooky Clown
This is just one lovely rhyme which deserves six stars well done, I really loved reading it and it is one I intend to read to my great grandchildren.
Thank you so much for sharing it. Kooky.
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This is just one lovely rhyme which deserves six stars well done, I really loved reading it and it is one I intend to read to my great grandchildren.
Thank you so much for sharing it. Kooky.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, and all the lovely stars!! I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Aussie
I so enjoyed your Christmas Poetry entry: children would love this poem/story. The Hedgerow Capers gang preparing for the birth of the Christ child is just what we need today. So good feelings you have written for all families. So important to remember Jesus at His birth. K xx
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I so enjoyed your Christmas Poetry entry: children would love this poem/story. The Hedgerow Capers gang preparing for the birth of the Christ child is just what we need today. So good feelings you have written for all families. So important to remember Jesus at His birth. K xx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, and that golden sixth star, Kay! I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx (your card will go in the post on Thursday!) :))
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How did you enjoy your cruise? Where did you go?
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We go next week, so still got it to come! Can't wait. We are going around the Canary Islands. We were supposed to stop off at La Palma, but the volcano is still chucking the lava out at a rate of knots. I hope we can still get near enough to get some photos. If I can, I'll post them with a poem. :)) xxxx
Comment from lyenochka
That's a very cute story told in rhyme. I liked how all the animals contributed in order to welcome the Baby Jesus. And you told it with the framework of a story within a story! Best wishes in the contest!
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That's a very cute story told in rhyme. I liked how all the animals contributed in order to welcome the Baby Jesus. And you told it with the framework of a story within a story! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Helen. I'm delighted you enjoyed it! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Jay Squires
Your Christmas poem should be a staple for children during this season, Sandra. The rhymes are spot on, it's fun to read and you've introduced the mice characters to add a little variety to the Christmas tale. A super job, Sandra. I thought you were on holiday!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Your Christmas poem should be a staple for children during this season, Sandra. The rhymes are spot on, it's fun to read and you've introduced the mice characters to add a little variety to the Christmas tale. A super job, Sandra. I thought you were on holiday!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Hi, Jay. No I go on holiday on the 23rd of this month and come home on the 5th of December. I've had back and leg troubles, the legs due to my back, so not a lot I can do about that, but sometimes I just have to have a little bit of a pity party, lol.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, and the sixth star, dear friend. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have fun with children's stories. I'll be reading yours in a moment. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxx
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Oh Sandra, I've been enjoying my own pity party for the last 6 or 7 months. Same thing, Back (bent wrong or something) but a shrieking pain also travels down my right leg. I went from walking 5 miles a day to whatever accrues going to and from the fridge, the bathroom, and my computer. I do hope you enjoy your holiday.
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Perhaps we can have a good pity party together when I get home again! I'm off to read your chapter.
