Freedom Given
From soldiers then and now6 total reviews
Comment from AprilViolet
This is the perfect acrostic poem in my opinion. And expertly written if I do say so myself. Love the message and the picture used as well. Worthy of a six star rating! Bravo!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
This is the perfect acrostic poem in my opinion. And expertly written if I do say so myself. Love the message and the picture used as well. Worthy of a six star rating! Bravo!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this sterling review... it makes my night. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a wonderful tribute to those who have and are currently serving our country. They deserve all our respect and thanks! Excellent job!!!!!!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
This is such a wonderful tribute to those who have and are currently serving our country. They deserve all our respect and thanks! Excellent job!!!!!!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thank you, I completely agree. I appreciate this great 6 star review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to all soldiers around the world who take on the battle and lose their lives so that we may be free, we will always have wars because there will always be greedy tyrants in this world, a fine acrostic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
A fine tribute to all soldiers around the world who take on the battle and lose their lives so that we may be free, we will always have wars because there will always be greedy tyrants in this world, a fine acrostic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from pookietoo
Hey, this is not a rhyming poem. Will you please change it? I would appreciate it. It is for my contest. Have a wonderful night and keep smiling. :)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
Hey, this is not a rhyming poem. Will you please change it? I would appreciate it. It is for my contest. Have a wonderful night and keep smiling. :)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Hi, I'm not sure what you want me to change. It's an acrostic and it rhymes, just as much as the other entries....I'm confused. The prompt asked for an acrostic rhyming poem, I think thats what I did. Thank you.
Hi again. Respectfully, your prompt said a rhyming poem, it did not state that every line must rhyme. If you want to change the prompt to include that, then I will withdraw my entry, as I do not intend to change it. Thank you.
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I would like every line to rhyme. :)
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Okay. I can't change the prompt now to say rhyme every line.
Comment from J.Lancaster
Expertly said. I like how you made it an acronym (is that the right word?) and kept a good rhythm to it at the same time. Wonderful message too. The last line really is a question to think about. Where would we be without our brave soldiers? Many people who scorn them rarely ever think about this.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
Expertly said. I like how you made it an acronym (is that the right word?) and kept a good rhythm to it at the same time. Wonderful message too. The last line really is a question to think about. Where would we be without our brave soldiers? Many people who scorn them rarely ever think about this.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this fine review, l really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you! I really appreciate this wonderful poem and the apprection of our veterans all year. I come from a military family where much was given and sacrificed for freedom. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
Thank you! I really appreciate this wonderful poem and the apprection of our veterans all year. I come from a military family where much was given and sacrificed for freedom. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this terrific review. :)