Christmas
What Christmas Is All About5 total reviews
Comment from NaughtieScribe
And memories they hold dear. - This line of your poem spoke loudest to me. Especially, during these days when so many have been lost in life, yet live in our hearts and prayers. I found nothing to adjust or tweak. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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And memories they hold dear. - This line of your poem spoke loudest to me. Especially, during these days when so many have been lost in life, yet live in our hearts and prayers. I found nothing to adjust or tweak. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Contest is over.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this poem about the true meaning of Christmas. We celebrate because Jesus came to earth to bring us salvation, and as He gave His all, we give our best to Him.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for sharing this poem about the true meaning of Christmas. We celebrate because Jesus came to earth to bring us salvation, and as He gave His all, we give our best to Him.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Welcome.
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Have a great day
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Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a good entry for the Rhyming contest. You tell all about the Christ child born in a manger and you did it with rhyme and rhythm. Great job!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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This is a good entry for the Rhyming contest. You tell all about the Christ child born in a manger and you did it with rhyme and rhythm. Great job!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Rhyming Poem writing prompt entry speaks in rhymes about Christmas, the Saviour, the laughing of children, the wise men giving gifts to the children; well said-done; I thank4 sharing- feel good reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more legibly on white background, fast, time's limited, dear, I, DR, wrote114 books on God,Humanity,Truth. A L C R E A T O R
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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This Rhyming Poem writing prompt entry speaks in rhymes about Christmas, the Saviour, the laughing of children, the wise men giving gifts to the children; well said-done; I thank4 sharing- feel good reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more legibly on white background, fast, time's limited, dear, I, DR, wrote114 books on God,Humanity,Truth. A L C R E A T O R
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have managed to tell a good story in your rhyming poem. The rhymes are sound, but it is the story that takes the limelight of the whole affair. This is probably as it should be, and I congratulate you.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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You have managed to tell a good story in your rhyming poem. The rhymes are sound, but it is the story that takes the limelight of the whole affair. This is probably as it should be, and I congratulate you.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thank you.
