Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an interesting entry for the Short Poem writing prompt. In particular the line end rhymes chosen are solid and imaginative ones. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021

Thanks, Katherine. Short and sweet.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your two lines, few words, speak volumes about being caught up in true love only to find it isn't so, Mystery Author. I like the end rhymes. The image is supporting. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021

Thanks, Jan. I can always count on you.