Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Football Chapter 34 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I must catch up on a couple of chapters. The buzz at school sure makes life unpredictable for Katherine. And the lawyer that's annoying her, must know he's in the wrong.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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I must catch up on a couple of chapters. The buzz at school sure makes life unpredictable for Katherine. And the lawyer that's annoying her, must know he's in the wrong.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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I am sorry you had to read this without any money attached. I appreciate it.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sorry it's taken me so long to review your post. But, they liked me so much at the hospital the first trip that, they made me come back for a longer visit. Glad to be out and reading your posts. :-) Hope your wrist is doing better!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Sorry it's taken me so long to review your post. But, they liked me so much at the hospital the first trip that, they made me come back for a longer visit. Glad to be out and reading your posts. :-) Hope your wrist is doing better!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Thank you and I'm sorry you had to read it with no money attached. You remain in my prayers.
Comment from MissMerri
I love how you tell stories. The characters seem so real to me... so easy to see and understand their motivations and thinking. The interaction and dialogue is also extremely well done. It seems obvious you are a professional. This is so good, I can't wait to read on. MM
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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I love how you tell stories. The characters seem so real to me... so easy to see and understand their motivations and thinking. The interaction and dialogue is also extremely well done. It seems obvious you are a professional. This is so good, I can't wait to read on. MM
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Soledadpaz
That Melton sure is aggressive and oppressive. If he's a lawyer, he should know about assault and battery. Apparently, he's the Neanderthal.
Jordan seems quite mature for his age, but maybe that comes from losing his father at such a young age.
Glad your wrist seems to be showing a bit of improvement. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!
Sol
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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That Melton sure is aggressive and oppressive. If he's a lawyer, he should know about assault and battery. Apparently, he's the Neanderthal.
Jordan seems quite mature for his age, but maybe that comes from losing his father at such a young age.
Glad your wrist seems to be showing a bit of improvement. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!
Sol
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Happy Thanksgiving and thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
Barb,
Wow. 27 more posts! Girl, I am so proud of you!! I wish I could get my hiney in gear and get back on the prose train. --sigh-- I don't know what's wrong with me. Grrrr... Oh, well. Maybe some day!
A couple of notes here:
1.) He walked up to Katherine's SUV and opened the driver(')s door. 44
2.) He winked. "You're welcome. I'll catch up with you later.(")
Thanks - I enjoyed!!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Barb,
Wow. 27 more posts! Girl, I am so proud of you!! I wish I could get my hiney in gear and get back on the prose train. --sigh-- I don't know what's wrong with me. Grrrr... Oh, well. Maybe some day!
A couple of notes here:
1.) He walked up to Katherine's SUV and opened the driver(')s door. 44
2.) He winked. "You're welcome. I'll catch up with you later.(")
Thanks - I enjoyed!!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the catches. I have corrected them
Happy Thanksgiving.
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You, too!!!
Comment from estory
As always, this continues to be on a high level. The dialogue is realistic and chocked full of emotion. I think you created a great scene in that confrontation between Gabriel and the ex; the dialogue was really sharp and you also set up what could be really suspenseful and tension filled chapters to come. This is really unfolding really well and I think it would make a great mini series for tv with a bit more polishing. estory
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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As always, this continues to be on a high level. The dialogue is realistic and chocked full of emotion. I think you created a great scene in that confrontation between Gabriel and the ex; the dialogue was really sharp and you also set up what could be really suspenseful and tension filled chapters to come. This is really unfolding really well and I think it would make a great mini series for tv with a bit more polishing. estory
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this chapter as I do all of them. Katherine's children all seem pleased with the coach being in their mother's life. The parking lot kiss seems to have generated a lot of talk and teasing. It was interesting that Jordon wanted to thank the coach for what he did.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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I enjoyed this chapter as I do all of them. Katherine's children all seem pleased with the coach being in their mother's life. The parking lot kiss seems to have generated a lot of talk and teasing. It was interesting that Jordon wanted to thank the coach for what he did.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Jordan and Coach are getting closer.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow! I reviewed the last post yesterday and by golly, you have posted once again! I love the love interest in this true-to-life story there is nothing I would rather do than read this kind of romantic story! And, after this one is over I will look forward to your next written work! I find no errors or corrections I would offer as suggestions so I'd say you are clear and steady all the way!
I have the patience of a soft pillow so do not worry that I will stop reading sometime soon!
Take good care of yourself,
Jesse
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Wow! I reviewed the last post yesterday and by golly, you have posted once again! I love the love interest in this true-to-life story there is nothing I would rather do than read this kind of romantic story! And, after this one is over I will look forward to your next written work! I find no errors or corrections I would offer as suggestions so I'd say you are clear and steady all the way!
I have the patience of a soft pillow so do not worry that I will stop reading sometime soon!
Take good care of yourself,
Jesse
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from tfawcus
Another good chapter, Barbara, with authentic dialogue and interaction between the characters. Jordan is solidifying his position by his caring and protective behaviour. However, I get the feeling that Katherine is capable of looking after herself!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Another good chapter, Barbara, with authentic dialogue and interaction between the characters. Jordan is solidifying his position by his caring and protective behaviour. However, I get the feeling that Katherine is capable of looking after herself!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Katherine is totally capable of taking care of herself, but the males in her life feel they must do it. LOL I can actually understand. I can take care of myself, but having raised 4 boys, each feels it's his job to take care of Mom. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Katherine and Gabriel are coming closer and it feel great to read about their exchanges. I am glad that Gabriel took care of Melton. Thank you for this enjoyable chapter..
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Katherine and Gabriel are coming closer and it feel great to read about their exchanges. I am glad that Gabriel took care of Melton. Thank you for this enjoyable chapter..
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
