Beach Day
Our unforgettable...7 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
It all brings that feeling of new love back back to where it first began. A nice poem. There is one place though "burrow" in the 2nd stanza, I think should be plural? Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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It all brings that feeling of new love back back to where it first began. A nice poem. There is one place though "burrow" in the 2nd stanza, I think should be plural? Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for this great review, please have a very happy Thanksgiving. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a sweet poem that you have written about you and your love having a picnic in the sand at the beach. You used all of the words and told a nice story in rhyme. Good luck on the contest;
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This is a sweet poem that you have written about you and your love having a picnic in the sand at the beach. You used all of the words and told a nice story in rhyme. Good luck on the contest;
Patty
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review....have a wonderful holiday. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
You have an unbelievable way with words! The imagery here is on point for sure! You wrote in such a way I felt like I was there. Excellent picture choice as well!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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You have an unbelievable way with words! The imagery here is on point for sure! You wrote in such a way I felt like I was there. Excellent picture choice as well!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this fantastic review and the 6 stars. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
You have incorporated the required words flawlessly! I just love the way reading this poem makes me feel. It makes me feel happy and warm. What a lovely day you have described between two lovers
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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You have incorporated the required words flawlessly! I just love the way reading this poem makes me feel. It makes me feel happy and warm. What a lovely day you have described between two lovers
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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An amazing review, thank you for making my day. :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have smoothly incorporated the required words into your lovely, appealing poem about how love began--and about looking forward to the future together. The setting is the perfect, romantic spot.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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You have smoothly incorporated the required words into your lovely, appealing poem about how love began--and about looking forward to the future together. The setting is the perfect, romantic spot.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. It's wonderful to hear from you. :)
Comment from Taminang Therese N
What a beautiful one. The words of the contest are well-fitting. First love days are always very memorable and touching when we recall them as we journey in life. It reminds me of our beach experience too. Thanks for the beautiful write. I wish you success.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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What a beautiful one. The words of the contest are well-fitting. First love days are always very memorable and touching when we recall them as we journey in life. It reminds me of our beach experience too. Thanks for the beautiful write. I wish you success.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this great review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Modee
Pretty words, along with pretty color scheme and a peaceful picture make this a very nice poem to read this evening. I love the beach and miss it very much since moving from California to Boise. :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Pretty words, along with pretty color scheme and a peaceful picture make this a very nice poem to read this evening. I love the beach and miss it very much since moving from California to Boise. :)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thanks for this nice review. I saw the ocean for the first time last September in Florida and it was amazing. Much more beautiful in person then seeing it on T.V. I'd miss it too if I were you...I bet the Pacific ocean is even more beautiful rhen the Atlantic. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
