Waiting
One of life's many decisions55 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This love poem, Waiting, brings the readers in to realize that love can definitely extend to an expensive new place to live instead of just that hot and cold personal relationship. Cute.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This love poem, Waiting, brings the readers in to realize that love can definitely extend to an expensive new place to live instead of just that hot and cold personal relationship. Cute.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Bill. I think she will just love that condo.
Comment from jaded831
Thank you for making me laugh first thing in the morning. Your poem had me believing you were talking about marriage, I loved the twist. Your poem stands out because i is different from the rest. But to be fair I must read them all.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you for making me laugh first thing in the morning. Your poem had me believing you were talking about marriage, I loved the twist. Your poem stands out because i is different from the rest. But to be fair I must read them all.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review. Nothing like starting the day off with a laugh.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was pretty funny when I got to the end to find they were talking about a condo. LOL Everything pointed to him asking to marry him but instead, his mind is on a new condo. Good luck in the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This was pretty funny when I got to the end to find they were talking about a condo. LOL Everything pointed to him asking to marry him but instead, his mind is on a new condo. Good luck in the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Patty. I'm surprised that he wasn't talking about a new pickup truck.
Comment from l.raven
HI You, your poem had me smiling...LOL...
take your time...but you better act fast...
a lifetime of commitment
or at least a year or two...that pretty much sums up the marriages today...LOL...
it's what we must agree on now
and it's all up to you
I love you poem...and love your picture...
very well written...love Linda xxoo Good Luck in the contest...xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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HI You, your poem had me smiling...LOL...
take your time...but you better act fast...
a lifetime of commitment
or at least a year or two...that pretty much sums up the marriages today...LOL...
it's what we must agree on now
and it's all up to you
I love you poem...and love your picture...
very well written...love Linda xxoo Good Luck in the contest...xxoo
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Linda. You are right about the marriages today.
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your welcome...this is one thing I wish I wasn't right on...I love true love...sigh...love xxoo
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very cute piece of work. It lead to a surprise ending. I think it should have a great chance in the contest. Even the artwork helps to mask the surprise until the very end. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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This was a very cute piece of work. It lead to a surprise ending. I think it should have a great chance in the contest. Even the artwork helps to mask the surprise until the very end. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Monica. I love surprise endings.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the love poem contest
that avoids all the key words mentioned in the prompt.
Nice touch of humor at the end.
Uncertain about the relationship, but certain about the condo.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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This is an excellent entry for the love poem contest
that avoids all the key words mentioned in the prompt.
Nice touch of humor at the end.
Uncertain about the relationship, but certain about the condo.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Robert. I can't wait to see what she decides.
Comment from RGstar
A simple down to earth poem, exactly how love should be, words with meaning without trimmings and decorations.
Nicely done.
Wish you well in the competition.
My best.
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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A simple down to earth poem, exactly how love should be, words with meaning without trimmings and decorations.
Nicely done.
Wish you well in the competition.
My best.
RGstar
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review. Right. Trimmings and decorations are for Christmas.
Comment from roof35
Nice love poem with a light hearted beat. Your illustration pairs well with your words. It is well written, well rhymed, and simply well written. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Nice love poem with a light hearted beat. Your illustration pairs well with your words. It is well written, well rhymed, and simply well written. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! You got me. As you planned, I looked at your photo first, and then read your love poem. You gave us a clue in the second stanza. "A lifetime of commitment, Well, at least a year or two," to own the condo. I love the twist at the end. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Haha! You got me. As you planned, I looked at your photo first, and then read your love poem. You gave us a clue in the second stanza. "A lifetime of commitment, Well, at least a year or two," to own the condo. I love the twist at the end. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks, LJ. It took me a few minutes to come up with that twist.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Waiting
Hah hah hah .... Excellent entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. I thought it was about a couple until I got to the end. Great twist. I would change the picture, I don't think realtors grave you that way... LoL
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Waiting
Hah hah hah .... Excellent entry for the Love Poem writing prompt contest. I thought it was about a couple until I got to the end. Great twist. I would change the picture, I don't think realtors grave you that way... LoL
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Gypsy. I don't have a great source for pictures.
