Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Your story is easily read. We are led to believe that they were a couple in love. Suprise~ She walks away while he's still kneeling on the ground.
Patty

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh dear, is this a rejection? What a shame for this thirty-five year old who is desperate to tie the knot! Ha ha ha, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks for sharing zanya

Comment from CL Huth

Excellent

Well done. It always saddens me when couples don't talk realistically about the future and one of them assumes marriage will save them. Good job on this short story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021

Thanks for sharing zanya