Along the path ....
In a dark place17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Also in Hebrews 13:5. This is ine of those scriptures that grounds me and melds my desire to be one with the faithful One, who cannot change His mind and is incapable of turning away, omnipresent, the omniscient One, the keeper of His word, beautifully written and with that repeating scripture. Written in aabb rhyming, great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Also in Hebrews 13:5. This is ine of those scriptures that grounds me and melds my desire to be one with the faithful One, who cannot change His mind and is incapable of turning away, omnipresent, the omniscient One, the keeper of His word, beautifully written and with that repeating scripture. Written in aabb rhyming, great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Yes, also in Hebrews and other places. Repeated time and again for our benefit. Many thanks for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice prayer. The rhyme scheme is quite good, but the meter is a little inconsistent. Some of your lines have four syllables, and some of them have five.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Very nice prayer. The rhyme scheme is quite good, but the meter is a little inconsistent. Some of your lines have four syllables, and some of them have five.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reviewing. Much appreciated. Yes, I knew that - but what I want to say constrains the number of syllables not vice versa. I could add little words, but to me that it is the cart leading the horse.
Comment from dragonpoet
Both the white and yellow fonts can be metaphors for literal light and the light of faith.
The rhyming is good and it seems a dialog between the speaker and God.
Though, the I will never leave you. Never forsake you can be two way friendship between the speaker and God.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Both the white and yellow fonts can be metaphors for literal light and the light of faith.
The rhyming is good and it seems a dialog between the speaker and God.
Though, the I will never leave you. Never forsake you can be two way friendship between the speaker and God.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Joan. I appreciate your lovely review.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Poetry, Spiritual writing prompt entry, speaks those who are suffering the darkness of grief, loneliness, darkness or blackness, love, peace and light of Jesus will always be there; well said, well done, thanks4sharing, good reviewing as I comprehend this legible post on white background, write more, fast, time is limited-precious, I, DR, still a learner wrote only114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
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This Poetry, Spiritual writing prompt entry, speaks those who are suffering the darkness of grief, loneliness, darkness or blackness, love, peace and light of Jesus will always be there; well said, well done, thanks4sharing, good reviewing as I comprehend this legible post on white background, write more, fast, time is limited-precious, I, DR, still a learner wrote only114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much fo reviewing my poem. Always appreciated.
Comment from L. Stewart
The power of Jesus is so pure in these words. Your connection with God and love for our Lord have really shone through effortlessly. His power is so strong, and He has gifted you incredibly.
Wow! I really loved the honesty in this work.
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The power of Jesus is so pure in these words. Your connection with God and love for our Lord have really shone through effortlessly. His power is so strong, and He has gifted you incredibly.
Wow! I really loved the honesty in this work.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Wow! Thank you so much. I do appreciate your very lovely and encouraging words, and also the gift of six stars.
Comment from Taminang Therese N
"I will never leave you
Never forsake you." This reminds me of a song, "I will never let you go unless you bless me" Yes my dear friend, every other thing can fail to be God can not fail me, I believe. I keep trusting and clinging to him. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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"I will never leave you
Never forsake you." This reminds me of a song, "I will never let you go unless you bless me" Yes my dear friend, every other thing can fail to be God can not fail me, I believe. I keep trusting and clinging to him. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review. Much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Miranda Langston
i like how you integrated this poem with a repeating quote, denoted by a different color. i can't figure out how to do that. lol. very well-written. excellent entry for the contest
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i like how you integrated this poem with a repeating quote, denoted by a different color. i can't figure out how to do that. lol. very well-written. excellent entry for the contest
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Much appreciated.
To change colour, you need to switch to "Advanced Editor" before you post it. Then there are options to change the size, font, and colour. (Colour is under A). Then highlight the parts you want to change, or all of it if you like, and click on the colour you want. Best wishes for doing it, it does help to emphasise words or phrases.
