The Other Side Of Light
Caught On...12 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a good poem about a sad and lonely life. I hope it is not a true-to-life story. Every experience in life is an adventure you have survived and be proud of it or forgive, especially if the bad times person was punished. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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This is a good poem about a sad and lonely life. I hope it is not a true-to-life story. Every experience in life is an adventure you have survived and be proud of it or forgive, especially if the bad times person was punished. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this understanding review and your insightful comments. :)
Comment from AnnieDawn
It would be easier for the reviewer if you would highlight the required words as it is difficult to scan the long story to find them. Your poetic story is good and I had an interesting read. The person is stuck and needs to let go and find a good counselor but hopefully, this is based on a fictitious character. Great job and well done.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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It would be easier for the reviewer if you would highlight the required words as it is difficult to scan the long story to find them. Your poetic story is good and I had an interesting read. The person is stuck and needs to let go and find a good counselor but hopefully, this is based on a fictitious character. Great job and well done.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thanks for this great review. I've had many reviewers tell me this, but to be honest, I think it takes away attention from the poem itself. Thanks again for reading. :)
