Betsy Wetsy
A disappointing Christmas2 total reviews
Comment from Ramona Scarborough
Santa must still think girls only like dolls. Loved this. Injecting humor in a story always makes good writing better. I know how hard it is to write a short piece this this. Congrats!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Santa must still think girls only like dolls. Loved this. Injecting humor in a story always makes good writing better. I know how hard it is to write a short piece this this. Congrats!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the review! I?ve been told I should have kept the doll. Apparently they are valuable collectibles now.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the story reminisces expectations dashed to pieces in a particular Christmas season.
The work highlights the mismatch of expectations and how it succeeded in diminishing t he protagonist's trust for Santa.
The work earns its texture through its successful compliance with the disappointing objective of the writing prompt.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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The objective correlative of the story reminisces expectations dashed to pieces in a particular Christmas season.
The work highlights the mismatch of expectations and how it succeeded in diminishing t he protagonist's trust for Santa.
The work earns its texture through its successful compliance with the disappointing objective of the writing prompt.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the review!
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Remain Blessed.
