They join me in dreams
Surrounded by lost loved ones10 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Damn, no wonder I've been thinking that I haven't seen you for ever. I haven't. Every time I do down to your previous story or poem, I haven't read it. And we both know I try to read everything you write. I thought that maybe I had just missed you during my two stints in hospital. I'll try to check in more often and not wait to be notified, because I don't get a message for contests. Hope all is well in your world! Ric
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Damn, no wonder I've been thinking that I haven't seen you for ever. I haven't. Every time I do down to your previous story or poem, I haven't read it. And we both know I try to read everything you write. I thought that maybe I had just missed you during my two stints in hospital. I'll try to check in more often and not wait to be notified, because I don't get a message for contests. Hope all is well in your world! Ric
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Hi Ric my friend. Thank you so much for your reviews. Take care. X
Comment from Frances Jean
A well written Naani satisfying the requirements of the form. Dreaming of loved ones is pretty special and I'm glad you awake happy. Just thinking of some of my family who have passed makes me sad. We'll done and take care Franky
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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A well written Naani satisfying the requirements of the form. Dreaming of loved ones is pretty special and I'm glad you awake happy. Just thinking of some of my family who have passed makes me sad. We'll done and take care Franky
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you Franky
Comment from jaded831
Whenever I dream of loved one's I awake happy as well. This gives you poem relatability, well at least with me. Thank God my dreams are happy. I wonder if people with unhappy childhoods feels the same. Just an opinion. Your poem is great, so far you're at the top.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Whenever I dream of loved one's I awake happy as well. This gives you poem relatability, well at least with me. Thank God my dreams are happy. I wonder if people with unhappy childhoods feels the same. Just an opinion. Your poem is great, so far you're at the top.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is a cool poem. If we dream, our dreams seem true. You wake up and wonder how come the casts featured someone we knew. Then the next day, we are hearing someone repeat words that we might have said or heard in our dream. Does this make sense?
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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This is a cool poem. If we dream, our dreams seem true. You wake up and wonder how come the casts featured someone we knew. Then the next day, we are hearing someone repeat words that we might have said or heard in our dream. Does this make sense?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Yes it does. Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Interesting entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Interesting entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Wendy G
Loved ones returning in your dream times means that they are never forgotten, and you are comforted by the happy memories you share. Best wishes for your lovely entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Loved ones returning in your dream times means that they are never forgotten, and you are comforted by the happy memories you share. Best wishes for your lovely entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Ma y thanks
Comment from Alan Lehrer
I see this as two different thoughts. One is the fan art review where
one missed people who have departed and wishes they were still
among them. They awake the next day and are happy they saw
them. This is very touching having seen this at times when I sleep.
The second indicates how precious our lives are and how we must
hold to fear of falling and by believing we will somehow get through.
This prompt is equally meaningful, Believing is what on needs today.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I see this as two different thoughts. One is the fan art review where
one missed people who have departed and wishes they were still
among them. They awake the next day and are happy they saw
them. This is very touching having seen this at times when I sleep.
The second indicates how precious our lives are and how we must
hold to fear of falling and by believing we will somehow get through.
This prompt is equally meaningful, Believing is what on needs today.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much Alan for the shiny stars and your kind and very interesting review.
Comment from papa55mike
It's incredible how our minds work when dreaming, and it can drag up some of the craziest things. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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It's incredible how our minds work when dreaming, and it can drag up some of the craziest things. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much Mike
Comment from Ricky1024
"Dreams"
This is a Naani writing prompt entry.
Talks about the afterlife and our final family gathering.
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Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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"Dreams"
This is a Naani writing prompt entry.
Talks about the afterlife and our final family gathering.
...
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thanks
Comment from LisaMay
I am pleased these are sweet dreams and your loved ones come visiting to make you happy. Dreams can so often be disturbing, but this is a a reassuring poem. Nicely rhymed.
Correction:
Add a 'd' in your title subheading:
Surrounded by lost love(d) ones
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I am pleased these are sweet dreams and your loved ones come visiting to make you happy. Dreams can so often be disturbing, but this is a a reassuring poem. Nicely rhymed.
Correction:
Add a 'd' in your title subheading:
Surrounded by lost love(d) ones
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thanks a lot for reviewing and spotting my silly mistake. Much appreciated.
