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Contest Contest Entry

A contest I'd like to enter myself

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Comment from RGstar
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This is the first I have seen written this way. Kudos to you.
It is god to see imagination bearing fruit.
A very well done.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you very much RGstar. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I've never created a contest , maybe I'll give it a try over the Christmas break.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I rarely join contests, but this one I might honestly consider entering. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You gave us all the necessary fact and used only a few words. Good job. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I've never created a contest , maybe I'll give it a try over the Christmas break.
Comment from damommy
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I think you should definitely create such a contest, and I'm betting it would be a big success. Everyone has something they want to write about, and making it into a news story would be very challenging. Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I've never created a contest , maybe I'll give it a try over the Christmas break.
Comment from jenintorre
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I really like this idea. It is very original and inventive. I would probably have a go at this. I wish you lots of luck in the contest contest competition. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
    Thank you very much Jen. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. I've never created a contest , maybe I'll give it a try over the Christmas break.
Comment from prettybluebirds
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You're right, I bet it would be a fun contest. Maybe this one will be the chosen one for the readers. This is an interesting type of contest and it will be interesting to see how many different ideas are put forth. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this entry.
Comment from Mary Shifman
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I think you're right, this would be a fun contest. I did notice that the computer gremlin got you a couple times in this short piece. Titleâ? Subjectâ?

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this entry. Thanks for letting me know about the computer gremlin, I fixed it.
reply by Mary Shifman on 09-Dec-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Modee
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Sounds like what most of the large supposed news stations are doing now. Breaking news shows on their screens - and then they fictionalize and spin each story to their benefit. haha. :)

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this entry.
Comment from SimianSavant
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I would totally do this contest. "Harambe posthumously wins 2016 election, using Trump as his Manchurian alias write-in". True story. But Trump added a little too much saturation to his TV make-up. He was supposed to look more like a banana and his rebellion against the dress code cost him the last election.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this entry.
Comment from royowen
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Because historical "facts" are seen not by ourselves, but through the eyes of another, even one's own biographies, by necessity aren't always the absolute, we have to fill in some things we can't remember. I actually take with a pinch of salt historical and biographical accounts of a good read, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you Roy for taking the time to read and review this entry.
Comment from Eunice Amero
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Yes this world be fun to write. So you wrote this to show what you would like to write on? You did well. I think the idea would be great. Then to get it in the newspaper would be fun. Good job and good luck.

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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this entry.
reply by Eunice Amero on 09-Dec-2021
    You are very welcome