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God s Masterpiece

With fingers entwined , I slowly feel my mind unwind

3 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem about God's Masterpiece for the Sunset contest. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 20-Dec-2021
    Thank you for the kind words, so glad you enjoyed my narrative ..living in the country side is beautiful

    I live at 700m ..surrounded by nature s warm arms .

    Keep safe!

Comment from RodG
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The poet puts you there with him on the top step of his church as the sun sets, relieving his stress as "All this beauty is God's gift to mankind." How many of us appreciate this gift as much as the Speaker does?

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    Thank you for reading my wee poem ..

    hopefully you enjoyed it.

    I?m very lucky to live in the country side at 700 m.. life moves slower and one appreciates the beauty that surrounds us ..

    Take care.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent story for the Sunset contest! Good luck with the win;-) The storyline is captivating and held my attention!

Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
    I appreciate your kind review .. I was getting worried .. I posted it a day ago now and yet you are the only one ( after 12 hours ) that thought it was worth a review.

    I was starting to think it was crap .. but your comments put a smile on my face .

    Thanks!

reply by Melodie Michelle on 12-Dec-2021
    Oh no it's not crap! Give it some time sometimes, unless you body your piece, it won't get bit one or two reviews but that has nothing to do with how bad it is it just means that not a lot of people saw it;-) Be confident my friend!!!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
    Sorry I m not familiar with the term : body your piece..??

    Sometimes I get anxious ..insecure.. but when I saw your post I felt much better .

    Thank you for the support and encouragement .. much appreciated.

    Keep safe!
reply by Melodie Michelle on 13-Dec-2021
    ;-)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
    Body of piece means blind contest entry .. okay thanks .

    I don?t promote my work ever. so I know after two reviews , my entry slides down the ladder .. but that?s okay ..

    getting none after 12 hours put me on edge ..

    .. when I review I do it because I liked the poem and not because I can earn money .. it seems natural to me.

    Take care !