Love is the best gift
Early gift ...9 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed the way your story unfolded. It was very engaging and entertaining. It drew me in and held my interest all the way through. You certainly have a gift as a writer. Your descriptive talent is excellent. Have a wonderful day!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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I really enjoyed the way your story unfolded. It was very engaging and entertaining. It drew me in and held my interest all the way through. You certainly have a gift as a writer. Your descriptive talent is excellent. Have a wonderful day!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for the encouragement of your words, and for the honour of six stars. All are greatly appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Annmuma
The love expressed by your family in even thinking of this gift is indeed the true expression of Christmas. I am so happy for you and wish you a wonderful Holiday Season. ann
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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The love expressed by your family in even thinking of this gift is indeed the true expression of Christmas. I am so happy for you and wish you a wonderful Holiday Season. ann
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Ann, for your review and your good wishes. Much appreciated. Love is indeed the best gift ever. Best wishes to you for this Christmas and New Year as well.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a wonderful early gift! Your children are so thoughtful to go through all of the energy, time, and expense for your son to risk the lockdown rules to rush over to your house cloaked in the darkness just to give you this special gift! This is a beautiful story and the fact that it is true is amazing!
A digital gift keeps on giving for all of 2021 it keeps on ticking!
An Aura is a perfect name for the perfect gift from all of your family! And the idea that you have been able to see your grandchild is the most precious gift that no amount of money could buy!
I am so glad that I searched your portfolio and found this gem of a story!
Thank you, thank you for the best gift for me since I haven't had a chance to get a gift for you this is your gift to me!
I don't have much money or resources to get you the gift that you deserve, so I will try to read all of your posts and review them when I can.
Take good care of yourself and your children as well as your grandbabies!
Jesse
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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This is a wonderful early gift! Your children are so thoughtful to go through all of the energy, time, and expense for your son to risk the lockdown rules to rush over to your house cloaked in the darkness just to give you this special gift! This is a beautiful story and the fact that it is true is amazing!
A digital gift keeps on giving for all of 2021 it keeps on ticking!
An Aura is a perfect name for the perfect gift from all of your family! And the idea that you have been able to see your grandchild is the most precious gift that no amount of money could buy!
I am so glad that I searched your portfolio and found this gem of a story!
Thank you, thank you for the best gift for me since I haven't had a chance to get a gift for you this is your gift to me!
I don't have much money or resources to get you the gift that you deserve, so I will try to read all of your posts and review them when I can.
Take good care of yourself and your children as well as your grandbabies!
Jesse
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Jesse. That is a lovely review, and I am glad you liked this story. Enjoying my posts is the best gift to me of all! You take care too, and I hope that your friend David will recover quickly from his surgery.
Comment from prettybluebirds
What a lovely and thoughtful gift you received from your family. These young folks are so techy nowadays. I grew up in the fifties when a computer was just science fiction. This should do very well in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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What a lovely and thoughtful gift you received from your family. These young folks are so techy nowadays. I grew up in the fifties when a computer was just science fiction. This should do very well in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. What a lovely review!
Comment from Mary Shifman
What a charming idea. I don't think I've ever seen an Aura but it sounds great, especially for people with families. You clearly have a wonderful son and a thoughtful one, as well. You'll keep enjoying this gift for some time!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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What a charming idea. I don't think I've ever seen an Aura but it sounds great, especially for people with families. You clearly have a wonderful son and a thoughtful one, as well. You'll keep enjoying this gift for some time!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Mary, for your lovely review. Yes it would be an ideal gift for all grandparents without family close by.
Comment from RodG
I like how you build the suspense in your story, making the reader--like the narrator--wait to find out WHAT this early Christmas gift is. And I can truly believe why it would be the best ever, Grandma.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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I like how you build the suspense in your story, making the reader--like the narrator--wait to find out WHAT this early Christmas gift is. And I can truly believe why it would be the best ever, Grandma.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much Rod! I really appreciate your encouraging support.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a wonderful story and wonderful gift. This Pandemic has been particularly tough on grandparents. Technology has helped to ease the miles. That's for sure. What has helped is the efforts of our children to keep us updated through use of the technology. The technology is no good if our children don't use it. Your son sounds very kind.
I enjoyed your story.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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What a wonderful story and wonderful gift. This Pandemic has been particularly tough on grandparents. Technology has helped to ease the miles. That's for sure. What has helped is the efforts of our children to keep us updated through use of the technology. The technology is no good if our children don't use it. Your son sounds very kind.
I enjoyed your story.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Debbie. You are exactly right. And more grandparents need an Aura, especially if their families are far away.
I am glad you enjoyed my story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Curse the lockdown and your son took a risk to get this gift to you. I have never heard of it before and I wonder if it was a fantasy gift. Merry Christmas to you and your family, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Curse the lockdown and your son took a risk to get this gift to you. I have never heard of it before and I wonder if it was a fantasy gift. Merry Christmas to you and your family, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Hi Dolly. Thanks so much for a great review! The gift is very real! I hadn't heard of it before either, but then my knowledge of the latest technology offerings is quite limited.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your excitement and joy at the very special gift exudes from the page as you tell the story. I like that you included lots of dialogue to relate what happened - that always gives a story life.
The complications of getting and delivering the gift gave an extra sense of urgency or mystery to the tale.
Hopefully we will all be out of this darn pandemic soon and there will be many more stories to rell of things that happened in 'Covid days.'
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Your excitement and joy at the very special gift exudes from the page as you tell the story. I like that you included lots of dialogue to relate what happened - that always gives a story life.
The complications of getting and delivering the gift gave an extra sense of urgency or mystery to the tale.
Hopefully we will all be out of this darn pandemic soon and there will be many more stories to rell of things that happened in 'Covid days.'
Steve
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Steve for your fabulous review! Very greatly appreciated.
