Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Having traveled the world playing music years ago, this one really hits home with me. In this smoky old barroom full drunks and hookers, every drink goes down easier than the last, and I always feel right at home. Yee Ha! I'm glad you didn't need a six to get the chartreuse plus sign, since it Friday and I'm all out. Thanks for sharing, and letting me know.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

I like this poem. I thought it would come 1st not 2nd. I think a Jesus one beat it.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' Country music ' , is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet tells it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

Thanks. It came 2nd. X

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

Thanks. It came 2nd. X

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-Dec-2021

You're welcome and Congratulations.
the Duchess 😉😉😉 :)))))

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a smooth flow of words that reminds the reader of a country song. Your opening line draws the reader into your poem and holds her there. Excellent use of words and a musical feel to your poem.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Is this true? That would be awesome! If not, this is still a great six line poem. I happen to love country music as well, so this resonates with me. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks. It's fiction. It came 2nd.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Great job on this fun verse. You chose well with your theme, artwork, and enjoyable rhyme scheme. I wish you lots of luck with this well-crafted verse!! Good luck, Jen.

Melissa

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thanks Melissa. It came 2nd.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. I happen to be a huge country music fan so this poem caused me to smile. I enjoyed reading. Again, Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thank you so mu h. Jen

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

I wanted to sing along! Very cute poem and concept. There is something special about country music and I believe it is the humble aspect of so many songs. The artwork is so nicely done and fits the poem well. Nice entry for the contest and good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thank you Sherry. It came 2nd. X

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, a very cute six-line poem, and an even cuter artwork choice. I not sure if Folks are coming from all around to sing along with her country sound or just to see her in those jeans...and that top? Ooh-la-la. A fun poem. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thank you so much. It came second. Jen. X

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation, Jen.
-A good topic,
effective imagery, and rhyme.
-You create a good word
picture of this country singer.
-She may not have much,
but she has her music, and
enjoys sharing it.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thank you so much. It came second. Jen. X

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Dec-2021

You are welcome, Jen, and congratulations on the second place finish!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes it's a great topic for a poem - music and here specifically, country music - one can almost here the beat as the lines bounce along -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

Thank you so much. Jen. X